Just Curious Ch. 08

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I start squeezing his shaft inside me, the walls of my pussy clenching and releasing him. His hand in my hair, he pulls my head back and looks down at me. "What are you doing, little minx?"

My voice is soft and tired. "Did you cum yet? I wasn't sure."

I get a smile and a kiss on my forehead. "Yes, little one, I did. You were so beautiful. I am so very proud of you." He rests my head back on his chest, wrapping his arm around me. I close my eyes and rest, contentedly.

Over the next twenty minutes the party-goers start to disperse. I sense movement around me and hear people saying goodbyes. Marcus's cock slowly goes limp and slips out of me. Soon Marcus is getting me up, he pulls his pants up and gets me dressed. We say goodbye to Kevin and Lexi, get the obligatory hugs and kisses from everyone, and then we're on our way home. I try my hardest to stay awake in the SUV. I'm only partially successful, I remember seeing the lights of the strip getting closer, but not actually turning onto the strip. Marcus shakes me awake in the garage and leads me upstairs to the third floor condo.

Instead of putting me in bed, which is where I really want to be, Marcus leads me to the playroom. I'm not sure I can take any more. Marcus leads me to the large metal table and helps me sit on the edge. He gently pushes me back until I'm lying on my side. My legs are hanging off the edge, so I pull them up until my knees are resting on the table. My elbows are bent and my hands are tucked under my chin. He plays with my hair, straightening it. The soft soothing motion lulls me into a near sleep-like state.

His hands leave me and I'm left in silence. All too soon the familiar clicking of the camera starts. Slowly the clicking sounds circles around me. After he puts the camera down, I feel his hands on my legs. Gently he runs his large hands from my ankles to my thigh, bringing my dress up and bunching it up around my waist. He spends a long time exploring my hip and thigh. His fingertips, his lips, his tongue, even his teeth seek out and sample every curve, every swell, every inch of skin.

"This is it. If you were mine, this is where I would mark you first. Scarification, branding, cutting, burning, freezing. I haven't decided yet." He caresses my flesh again, like a sculptor with a clump of clay. "This is a pristine piece of real estate. Soft, supple, consistent coloration, and long. God, your legs are so fucking long." More kissing and biting.

"Come on. It's almost 4 AM, let's get you to bed. We have an early morning." I must have groaned out loud, because he adds on quickly: "Shhh. One quick thing in the morning, then I'll let you get back to sleep till supper."

"Oh, thank gawd!" He laughs and helps me off the table.

"When you're exhausted, you are more likely to act without thinking too much. It helps me see what is natural instead of what is planned."

"You're doing sleep deprivation studies on me? That's barbaric." I try to tease him, but I don't have the energy for it, so my words come out flat.

"It's not barbaric, it's domineering. And as I am dominating you this week, it is my absolute right to get your body and mind into a space where I can work with it." He starts guiding me toward my bedroom. After letting me use the bathroom, he tucks me in bed. I put my wrists up, expecting to be cuffed for the night. "No, that's not necessary tonight. You won't touch yourself because you know that is not what I want."

"What if I dream again?"

"You won't, but I'll be watching, just in case. I won't let you disappoint me." I get a chaste kiss goodnight, then I watch as he turns and his massive frame obstructs the light as he walks out the door. I fall asleep feeling alone.

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tameriustameriusabout 9 years ago
Love the chapter, I like the way they develop

Though if you are looking for feedback I think it should have been more of a problem to that Marcus woke her with such anger, left her to stew in anxiety and insecurity about what caused the anger, and then as a first after coming back he tells her the actions he considered in his anger. In my opinion once he realised he shouldn't do those actions because it would be blaming her for her dreams that are a sort of PTSD, he should never have mentioned them again. Though ofcourse mistakes are human and especially when emotional.

So okay maybe he did tell her all the ways he wanted to punish her and make her even more afraid of angering him, and insecure in her postion with him. But then it shouldn't have been within hours that he told/requested her to forget that morning and trust him again. And even less would a woman with her background be able to indeed let go of such a de-stabilizing morning.

So, the gist of my feedback is you made working through that a bit too easy. But then again, stories don't have to be completely real-life-realistic, and the way you wrote it was good, I only realised my critic when I was thinking it through.

Keep writing!

AnonymousAnonymousabout 9 years ago
NOT BDSM BUT ABUSE

Marcus=Dustin. Both pretty much the same person. Only difference is Marcus does just enough to make her think he cares for her. Maybe she'll smarten up and leave. Nthusiastic and the 2 other anonymous make excellent points. Sadly I keep reading and hoping for the best outcome for this story.

AnonymousAnonymousabout 9 years ago
AWESOME

I love the way you show Marcus helping her get over what the asshole did to her. The way he keeps pushing her to accept the way she feels and showing her submission is not only about sex but a way of life. Great story keep em coming.

nthusiasticnthusiasticabout 9 years ago
Looks like

Stockholm Syndrome the way he keeps her totally dependent on him for all her needs. Wish she'd use her safewords & show us she's regained a sense of self rather than just caving in all the time out of fear. She doesn't seem as if she has much more choice than when she was with Dustin. Marcus is just transferring her dependency from Dustin to himself. I want to see her get away safely but I'm afraid she won't.

I'm torn between the two sides of Marcus we see; occasionally he's caring & supportive but then he turns around & becomes hurtful & abusive, demanding she do dangerous things. She's still doing what he wants because she's afraid.

I hope the author allows her to outgrow Marcus & make her own choice after looking around, let her find someone who truly deserves her. We know Dustin doesn't & so far, neither does Marcus.

Agree with the last two comments even if they were anonymous. They made good points about the results of riding naked or rugburns versus rockburns.

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