All Comments on 'Linda's Discovery Ch. 02'

Well done! I look forward to more!

Wonderful story and well written!!!

What an erotic story. I loved the second part as much, if not more, than the first part.

I really appreciate how you established the characters in part one, allowing us to see the relationships develop. I also REALLY like that in part two, it didn't end in some sort of roman orgy.

This story (parts one and two) has a very believable element to it. I hope you will continue writing. You have a gift.

Well written and damn sexy, five stars.

Loved it! You write really well, and the Mom/Son aspect, damn. very hot story!

Very good start hope this more to come, would think at least a group night maybe moms at the frat house.

keep writing.

A fine continuation of your story. The hot tub scene is one of the most erotic I've read in quite a while...the in the flesh revelation of a mother-son love to an outsider is one of my favorite fantasy moments! Looking anxiously for the next!

Loved every moment (and movement :) ) of the so well told. You certainly have the gift for the erotic - a tale that is so well written that it transports the reader to Linda, Mark, Annie and Tom

Venus

Just to add my two cents. You are quite a wonderful writer. Your development of characters is at a superior level; one not usually found in erotic writings. While most are content to leave the reader "outside looking in, you have the marvleous ability to drawing your reader into the story and leave her completely overcome by what is happening in her own living room. :)

I hope you write more. You have a real gift.

You are too damn good. Wow, that was hot and hard.

Got to go to the bathroom so I can suck my cum out of my panties you got me for sure, thanks a bunch.

Just 1 word.... HOT !!! I hope u continue writing... U hav a real talent...

Once more you have done it again. Fantastic little tale please more soon

You maintained your quality level very well in Chapter 2, and you didn't get in such a rush to get to the big MFMF scene that you let down on the flow and the descriptions.

There is tenderness in this story, blended with the eroticism, that speaks to the feelings you must have for your son. This is not a dirty story, but rather a very sweet one. The mother in the story displays a healthy self-respect along with a deep love for her son, and the fact that she has raised him as a single mother is used to explain the deep feelings they have for each other, on many different levels. Being his mother and admirer and secret sharer and lover all coalesce, and you make it all seem natural, and beautiful!

Thank you for writing such a sensitive, moving story, and for sharing your feelings with us. I feel privileged to have been allowed to read it.

You obviously are very good at this. Please keep writing.

There is no doubt that this is the hottest fuck story that I have ever read. Hope you continue to write as you have a knack of drawing it out and making a person really hot and then jacking off to the dream that you created. Thanks again and keep up the stories. Gale

a nice conclusion... well, I hope that it isn't a conclusion!

You have a great talent for writing - PLEASE don't stop! Would be nice to see the two sons getting together too!

As you so well illustrate in this delightful story, sex is so much better when the partners truly love each other. Your mother and son are two very nice, considerate people. They obviously respect each other and defer to the other's desires. Although their sexual activity eventually becomes very hot and passionate, there is never the slightest trace of unwanted domination or latent cruelty. Their genuine love is the controlling force throughout, and they seem more concerned about the other person's pleasure than their own. I would have been so overwhelmingly happy if I could have had a real-life romance like this with my mother.

love your writing style and can't wait for the next chapter...

I love your stories about your adventures with your son. Great story line and wonderful content. Please keep up the good work and give us more of your mother and son adventures to enjoy!

Having discovered Literotica several years ago I have read many many great stories but your's, by far, is the best one yet. Your writing is excellent, your description of the events is superb, and I feel as if I were actually there watching this wonderful story unfold. I certainly hope this is not your only submission as I will be watching for more new material by you. Great Job!

Where do I start – so much good stuff in such a short story…

I loved you sniffing and even licking your “crusty panties” that Mark had used to jerk off. I love your sensual lust and behavior!

Your oral expertise and tease is really hot. I love that you swallowed his cum. Your proclivity to not rush his blowjob, but to crest – ebb – crest – ebb was really hot! And of course – your sexy yellow panty strokes – well let’s just say, that visual thought makes me hard and wet with pre-cum.

I love your description as you drank your iced frappuccino – that “just fucked” look of satisfaction and happiness on my face.

Mark and Tom sharing panties was a surprise to me, a really hot surprise, very believable. And you sharing with Mark about Anne listening to your “sex phone” call was hot. I enjoyed being reminded of Anne sticking her finger in her wet pussy and letting you lick it clean.

The scene with you, Anne and Mark around the hot tub was extremely erotic. I love your description of each person’s arousal. I love the kissing between you and Anne. And then you are eating her pussy – WOW, Linda! This is my erotic fantasy: making love to my mom, while she eats her best friend’s pussy!!! Your description of how much you loved being fucked by your son, while eating her pussy heightens the erotic sensuality even more. Makes me hard just visualizing this as I type my comments. I am losing control as you describe Anne eating Mark’s love juice from your pussy! What a hot scene!

Your description of the lovemaking the next morning: “what ensued was a long, tender, sensual, love-making hour. I was positively glowing when we finished” was so romantic and loving.

And then the foursome after dinner: best friends, two moms, two sons, foreplay, fucking… WOW, HOT!!! And your detailed description of this scene created mental visual imagery, again that make my cock leak pre-cum and cause me to think: Oh, to be Mark or Tom!

And just when I thought I was as aroused as I could be, you and Anne share a 69, eating each others pussy and drinking your son's love juices mixed with feminine cum!

I believe this story is so hot because you wrote about real life experiences – even if you embellished it some. When you consider your reader rating – on your first story – Lady Linda, you are good.

Your fans, or at least this one wants to hear more about future fuck sessions: swapping sons, perhaps inviting other moms and their sons to enjoy. Perhaps include a dinner outing, what you all were wearing, the foreplay in the car, at the restaurant, on the dance floor…

We are waiting to read another hot adventure of mother/son incest… and mother/daughter incest would also be extremely hot… Finally, what is your relationship between the four of you like today?

Great real life adventure – thanks for sharing. I am coming again!

Linda, As I stated in chapter 1 you are amazing.

Please do not stop this series as it has so much more potential

Just as well written and satisfying as the first chapter. I hope there is more to come.

You have an amaizng way of making me feel like I'm im in the room watching all of this go down. Please keep this story going. If you ever want any ideas or suggestions please feel free to contact me.

Thanks again for a sensual and erotic story.

I have enjoyed both chapters very much please continue to add more. Thank you

Excellent story from front to back.You have a lovely concise style.I hope you continue with more accounts.Your attention to details that add to your tale are lovely.My best to you and your son

Very good story, how much is real??? Please continue writeing, you are the best I've seen here.

Linda - You are a wonderful writer: character development, exciting plot, excellent description and dialogue, dramatic tension and eroticism - its all there. You sweet coupling of Mom and Son made me wish I could couple with my Mom. There is a tremendous amount of room in this story for a dozen more chapters. Get to work. AnHoa Rifleman.

Amazing story please continue. I absolutely loved it and I am craving more.

Thanks Linda for a really erotic and well written story .

I began it last night then had to go out but tonight I finished it completely if you know what I mean. Keep writing. I like the dialogue too. makes it hotter and reminds me of some past adventures.

You write beautifully. Very hot.

Love the two stories, I'm still hard as a rock and pumping like a fire hose. Please give us some more.

Love the story very hot and well written

Really nothing

I love your stories. Keep them coming.

I just love your stories! They are beautiful...as are the perfect relationships between these mothers and their sons! Simply marvelous!

The hottest story ever!!!!!!!! And so well written. Please write more.

THANK U THANK U Linda, it is hard 2 find a bloody good story on here, that i can get in2, but i felt as though i was really mark, then later tom... hope u continue this story,

5*

tittylover has asked if u could maybe add the mums going 2 a frat house, i would say nooooooo, as i think it would take the realism away from the mum/son concept mayb u could add another single mum/son? mayb another single mum/daughter

Linda, both your stories are fantastic and HOT.Hope you keep the series going! Thanks for your great stories! NaturallyI have added you to my Favorite Author list.

hmmmm taboo as it is would love to do my sons and their friends

Wow! Do you have a remedy for a sore dick?

Having read many,many erotic stories, I find that this one is one of the best I

ever came across. Just imagine how wonderful life could be among families,

if it were not for the killjoys and moral apostles.

Of course young children should be left well alone, to grow up as innocent

as possible.

Thanks for a great read.

Stories like this make me wish I had had a mommy like your characters.

Had to read this much more rapidly than I would have liked. It and Ch. 01 certainly will get a re-read tomorrow - something I don't do very often. I expect tomorrow will confirm my rather hasty favorite story, favorite author designations.

Pretty Linda: We are still waiting for the next chapter. AnHoa Rifleman

Look, this story is on the all time high scoring page. Its one of a dozen and a half of the all-time favorites. That is quite an accomplishment so don;t let it atrophy. Get on the stick and come up with the next chapter and make Pretty Linda even juicier and hotter and her son even harder and more of a horndog. Linda deserves it.

AnHoa Rifleman

I hope there is more to this story or another one. Each story was good for twocum shots.

As a healthy male, I don't usually read this genre of story but the quality of writing and story line development are an incredible turn on. The pace makes it very believable and you have a new fan!

yeah i usually stop reading these things like half way through... but i just couldnt stop. you're a genius!!! i hope there's more to this story and some other titles that r just as good.

I have an idea for the next chapter. One of the boys is home and his mom shares his seaman with her friend the way she did at the end of the story. She asks her friend how she liked the taste of her son. Then she offers her best friend to her son as a gift to them both

I really enjoyed your stories, you have a great imagination, I hope to read more from you. Single parents have to support each other, haha

T.H.

Super writing ,great story,once I started reading I could not stop.

Simply the best in a long time. Compliments!!!!!!

You had talent, my lady. I hope you have more mom/son stories (my favourites) planned for the future. Thanks a lot for your effort and keep up the great work.

oh yeah i'm looking for more from you

Kam

hope chapter 3 cums soon great writting

Now it's time to switch partners!

CHRISTMAS VACATION IS NEAR

Very exciting story. Hope you can continue the story. This time Mom swapping or son swapping.

A continuation of this story would be great. But even if you don't continue it, just keep writing. You've got skills!

Made me want to go do my mom

By far this is the most erotic and hot mom-son incest story. I wish you were my mom or your neighbor and I could be present while you are doing your son. Please write more stories.

Thank you for a beautiful story! Extremely erotic and well written... A pleasure to read.

This is one of the most erotic stories I've ever read. I really enjoyed the womans perspective in the greatest story I've read in a long time

Thank you,

A Fan

P.S. Please write much more!!!!

everyone should have a mom as hot and adventurous as Linda! Definitely worth Five Stars, and I hope you will keep on writing.

DUNNO WHY SITE WON"T TAKE RATING......BUT ANYWAY....JUST GREAT111

THE BestS Story i've read so far!!!!

At first I didn't like reading about all this family lovin', but found I enjoyed the "how it all started" parts of the story. This one made me wish my hubby and I had shared some phone sex in our four years of long distance dating. Jealous!

You are a really great story teller and I would like to read more on this couple. Especially the details about them sharing their son's a little or a lot more!

This second part was pure joy , so very erotic such a real turn on .

stories don't get any better nor the writing more exciting .

this was a real joy to read . and the author is second to none .

loved it to bit . linda 's discovery part two was nothing but an incredible very hot horny beautiful ending with both boys filling both moms with all there young juices

a fantastic brilliant well written story.

I for one can't wait for chapter 3 when maybe they swap ?

I really liked your story. Very sexy and well written. There was enough teasing and suspense to keep me interested (hard) through out both chapters. And of coarse the sex was awesome. I really hope you write more. Will they swap moms? will there be a 4some? I hope so. Thanks for sharing your story with us

Art

The story is so touching and erotic, it totally made me want to be there and love them both.

This story isn't near long enough. I thought it was slow getting started in Chapter 1, but it got better and better as it went along. And, now it's over. Uh, how is Chapter 3 coming along? lol.

Love your story. If most mothers knew just how many of the sons thought about being with their mom.

Speaking for Mothers, It's a shame Son's aren't wise enough to realize 'mothers' are available. Some of us we not mature enough to realize these desire were possible. I wasn't! Not until VWC10 posed that subject in years past. So many opportunities for further adventure through the mind of this quality author.

I have been reading stories on literocia for a long while and have writen some also. This is one of the best ever. BRB AD53

She wrote this last year.. Has she just quit? Is she writting somewhere else? Anybody know?

Lindat18 thanks for being so brave to write about your taboo love and sex life with your son, you're a very special Mom and woman is all I can say!

I have been reading Literotica for a number of years and this is the very best I have read yet. Toward the end of Chapter 01 the anticipation of what was to come was buzzing in my head, and with Chapter 02 all my fantasies were fulfilled. As noted in some of the other comments I think the fantasies you have captured in this tale are probably a lot more prevalent than we think............

Very well written and very well paced to the point that I became part of the story, anticipating every move yet to come/cum. I am already looking forward to Chapter 03 and beyond......... Keep up the good work!

Sorry to say that I just now discovered this talented writer's work. Even sorrier to see that she has not posted anything more for almost a year.

What a loss for the many of us who so admired her first two stories.

Please come back.

KEEP IT UP, LET US READ MORE MORE MORE

this was one of the best stories I have read - wish you had more like these - hurry and write more -

Please write more!

This story was hot and the more I read the more I got harder...i

I've never come so much reading her stories. Takes me back to hearing my Mom fuck Dad at nights and wanting to take his pace between her legs. Write more!

Your story is sooo hot. One can't help but cum while reading it.

I just came all over myself reading this one. Awesome story - hope it's mostly true!

What a fantastic story - absolutely red hot! I loved everything about it, and just know it's going to lead to some Mommy Swapping later on. More please!!

You writing made this sound and feel so realistic. It took me days to get through both chapters. I hope you enjoyed writing it as much as I enjoyed reading it. Thanks

One the hottest stories on Literotica. Got me hard real quick. Hope you write some more about this foursome. I'd love to jerk off while the boys fuck each other's mother.

Absolutely fabulous story. Can't believe how hard I got reading it. The narrative and characterisations, the dialogue, all of it -- so hot, and well-written. You haven't posted for ages, but you really should do more. Thanks for this one, at least.

The second chapter certainly lived up to the first.

Great writing. I will keep my eyes open for anything else you may write.

Really enjoyed it.

Thank you

This story is just beyond words...loved it alot.and hope soon you come up with similar style stories.

want another chapter. Something like swinging incest. Awsome writing style and story line. Really enjoyed reading.

Great story, I hope that someday you might decide to add a chapter or two.

Linda thanks for the first story, well done, I hope you will continue to write your story.

I read it, re-read it, and read it a third time. It was so lovely. I am a married woman, with two children, a boy and a girl. I have always been ashamed of my secret thoughts about them, but your story gave me courage. I hope you write more like stories for me to enjoy.

Abigail