Redemption

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"Now Daniel. NOW"

They erupted cataclysmically together. Torrents of their combined essences swirled around and within, sweeping them up to an almost unfathomable ecstacy, which continued on until neither of them had any more to take, or to give. Completely spent and sated she slipped off and down to lie at his side.

After a very prolonged haze she finally opened her eyes to find him gazing intently at her. She sighed.

"Dan ... There are no words."

"I'm ever at your service Ma'am." he grinned.

With as much solemn gravity as she could muster she answered. "Yes. You are ... And will be ... For everything." She could then no longer keep from bubbling up from deep inside a smile, a dazzling, radiant smile, such as she had not shown the world in so very long. And he basked in its glow.

"And we're going to do all of this very, very often." she added exuberantly. "I've got a lot of catching up to do."

Just how often she would allow him his own she didn't yet know. As often as SHE desired she supposed, and suspected that that would also be very, very often ... But not always.

Her smile softened to one of serenity. Maureen had been so very right. About all of it. About all of him. She reached out to envelop him in an all encompassing embrace.

"My sweet, sweet servant. My Daniel ... My Love."

The cure was complete. For both of them.

********

And somewhere in eternity another entity beamed. The two people she had loved more than anyone and anything in her previous existence had found themselves. Together. The seeds she had so carefully planted had borne exquisite fruit.

And her own eternal happiness was now complete.

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AnonymousAnonymous4 months ago

Standing ovation! Bravo!

— Me

AnonymousAnonymous11 months ago

Beautiful.

paulsubpaulsubover 1 year ago

It was perfection. The willing of a submissive to give themselves to their Dominate partner to take use as they please is the perfect fit of trust that will lead to love ❤

AnonymousAnonymousabout 2 years ago

The characters are beautifully described and built in a way I can invest in them. The descriptive narrative and engaging dialogue immersed in romance and love is excellent. Thank you for a fantastic story.

AnonymousAnonymousover 2 years ago

Good premise.

But the sex it simply mechanical. No preliminaries. No foreplay. No real body part involvement except his tongue and her pussy. No touching him or his cock and balls. No discussion between them about what he/she liked and how he/she liked it.

Disappointing.

Three stars.

kumar_tamil21kumar_tamil21almost 8 years ago
wonderful

yours stories are truly romantic and wonderful. i hope you write more often. i usually keep on searching four your new story, please write more stories.

MissLisaJonesMissLisaJonesabout 8 years ago
It feels so real

OneWhoAdore's greatest strength is the way you can't help but identify with his characters. They feel so real, they share our fear and weaknesses as well as sharing our loves and joys.

This is especially true with Redemption. We all knew, right from the start, where the story was heading but it was a privilege to share the journey as two damaged souls found love, the greatest gift of all.

Bravo

kumar_tamil21kumar_tamil21about 8 years ago
super story

after long time with wonderful story

AnonymousAnonymousabout 8 years ago
Wonderful!

What a truly beautiful story! Fantastic and special!

AnonymousAnonymousabout 8 years ago
How wonderful

This would be well received in the bdsm catagory, had you posted it there. I hope many cross readers from there find it.

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