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Click hereAnother one of Joy's off handed comments from that night filled his head.
"You're an angel, all you need are wings."
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Anonymousover 5 years agoOverall I thought it was a pretty good story, but it did have some weird moments. Such as, the way she constantly berates him, why on earth would Ethan choose to stay friends with the lesbian lawyer bitch? And his cousin Ashley? She made it plain early on she wasn’t interested in him, so why beat his head against the wall obsessing over her? He should have cut his losses and moved on. On that one I speak from experience. But the ending. Where would I start? Let’s just say it was so strange it almost ruined the whole story for me. 3*.
Anonymousover 6 years agoI really enjoyed this! Couple of minor things to note though - you really need to pick what cup size Ashley is, because she keeps changing randomly between B and C. Also, perhaps some of Ethan’s internal thoughts could do with italicising for clarity.
Nice!
lostindavoidover 10 years agoAuthorI wrote it the way we said it back home and this is the first time I had to put it in woods. I never knew it was Japaneses though ... thanks ... I didn't plan the lesbian angle ... it just kind of happened.
