Silver Pt. 04

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"Are you sure that you want to put yourself through that?" I laughed.

"Yes, I'm sure; I want to ask them all how they managed to put up with you," she laughed while giving me a little pinch on the cheek.

"I told you the first night that I met you, they were the reason that I lost my sight!"

"And that's exactly what I'm talking about," she laughed.

We relaxed, reliving the previous night's fun while finishing our coffee before working our way into the living room and sitting down to read the mail. Besides the monthly utility bills, shopping circulars, and coupons, only one piece of mail was exciting. "Seems like you and a guest are invited to a wedding for a Joeseph M. Dalton and a Rebecca M. O'Hara," Marlene said. "Do you know them?"

"Yes, it's my cousin Johnny's son, Joey and his fiance Becky," I answered. "When is it?"

"September twelth."

"Looks like we are going to a September wedding," I said with a smile.

"Really, Michael? You want me to go?" she asked excitedly.

"Marlene, why would I not possibly want you to go?"

"I don't know, I just wanted to make sure."

"Sweetheart, where I go, you go," I replied. "That is if you want, of course," I continued.

"Michael, you are going to be so sorry that you said that," she laughed, as she hugged and kissed me. "Oh, now I can go out and by a new dress, and shoes, and jewelry, and get my hair and nails done... I can't wait!"

"Oh brother," I laughed, "I am so screwed."

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* "Betcha By Golly, Wow" artist: The Stylistics, released: 1971 *

* "The Long And Winding Road" (Lennon McCartney) Artist: The Beatles, released 1970 *

Hoping that you enjoyed Part 04! Looks like there will be a lot of new introductions and a wedding in Ppart 05 of the Silver series!

Thank you once again for reading these stories, taking the time to vote, and leaving your comments. Please feel free to leave me a private email, I'll be happy to respond to all! Until next time, enjoy...

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rflikeslitrflikeslitover 7 years ago
CantC54 I admired your very eloquent response to Anon

I have to laugh at the idiots that have read thru several pages before they insult us with their ignorance , I was taught if you don't like some thing to stop doing it not to continue ...seems an obvious choice to me!

thoroughly enjoying your story.

CantC54CantC54over 8 years agoAuthor
To Anonymous:

Dear Anonymous, I find that all of my readers are very educated and can follow the flow of my stories without me having to hold their hands. but To you, I'll make an exception... First of all, he typed the song into the tablet using a fucking keyboard. Please don't suggest to me that tablets don't have physical keyboards. And please don't offend me as a blind man by thinking that keyboards have braille on every key. Second, you are on an erotic website, and if you don't want to read a story with actual sex, there is a section on this sight called: Non-Erotic; go read that instead, or maybe take a look at Sleeping fucking Beauty.. Third: If you are so offended as an "author", why don't you leave us readers a list of your stories so we can take a gander at your sensational writings. And as the "author" that you consider yourself, you might want to give positive criticism to other real authors instead of provoking them with the anger that you apparently hold within yourself and stop giving us the bullshit that you so eloquently throw. If I am wasting your time with my stories, why are you wasting my time by giving me your dumb ass bullshit. Go read some other really good stories on this site instead of mine and stop wasting my time. Come on, give us a list of your stories and stop hiding behind your keyboard you fucking whimp...

AnonymousAnonymousover 8 years ago
IF

If He doesn't read Braille how can he see to type a song into a tablet?

Please do not become a writer you wasted enough of my time as a REAL WRITER!

Just one other thing this is romance not fuck fuck tie me up bullshit!

Don't even have a story!!! sucks sucks sucks sucks.... What a waste of my time!!!!!!

GforGrahamGforGrahamover 8 years ago
really enjoying

You have a good flowing style making it easy to read and follow the story. 5 stars.

Please be careful in describing what people are doing, because it is written in first person and he is meant to be blind. He cannot see others do small things. It took me quite some time to actually believe he was completely blind. (part 5 where he describes what he does see. Yes I came back a part to leave this note.)

In first person style if the lead does not see it, hear it, smell it, feel it or taste it (or any other sense it) then it does not exist in the story.

sanser6sanser6over 8 years ago
Still sticky in a good way

Do I sense trouble ahead?

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