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Tell me how you like the story so far. How is the pacing? Is it too slow or is it too fast? Is it confusing you anywhere? Drop that feedback on me. Since this is the first story I've ever written in the history of my life, I expect I will be eaten raw by a few English connoisseurs and grammar gods. Please go easy and spare me thy wrath, oh holy one. Haha, anyway I will get started on the next part. Peace!
- COMMENTS
Anonymous6 months agoVery well articulated .. except few minor mistakes here and there .. loved the theme ...
Have it edited and proof-read before posting ...
Jutah3995about 1 year agoHey you gotta helluva start and it's a very interesting story. The story keeps the reader engaged and with the sudden change in the mother's actions going both ways and now seems she might be regretting it at the end of this chapter is killing me to read the next. So far, Great job and I gotta give you a 5 ⭐ with the intense emotions of the son and mother..🤘👍👍👍
Dougntexasover 1 year agoGreat story but not enough to suit me. Thanks so much for the talented writing
a_reader_from_germanyover 2 years agoThat story has some redeeming qualities, but to me the immaturity of the son is hard to stomach. He surely gave his mother a shock when she awoke to his abusing her, only to have to encounter brute force as she tries to put an end to it. So even without knowing what might enfold later on, it's quite clear that in the second encounter she is taking the initiative, for whatever reasons. Still he asks himself 'why was she so upset the first time, why does she act differently this time?' REALLY?
