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I laid there for a minute and said, "Thank you."
"For what?" Ann asked.
"For calling me."
Ann and I laughed together before falling off to sleep together.
- COMMENTS
black75over 7 years agoThis is a special story! The attention to detail is great. Gives me ideas for a trip...
Anonymousabout 8 years agoFirst off, about the disliking of the BBW term, I dated 2 ladies, for quite some time, who called themselves BBW's, and proudly! They were both beautiful, very sexy and proud of what they were.
I guess the only thing about this story that didn't seem right was your description of Ann as about 350# vs her short stature. I met a lady who was much taller and about 300# but with that much weight on her it was nearly impossible to find her clit as the fat around her pussy completely buried her vaginal entrance, along with the thickness of her thighs adding to the closed down entrance. When we tried fucking, there was no way to tell whether I was actually in her or just banging her between those puffed out lips. Don't get me wrong, it was fun and I definitely got off, but being able to do with Ann what you wrote about would seem pretty much impossible at so much weight and several less inches of height. The rest of this story seems to describe somewhere between the 2 ladies I mentioned at the beginning of this, one who was about 5'5" and 250 and the other who was about 5'9" and maybe 275. Just thinking about them while reading this had me hard and dripping! Looking forward very much to the next installment! 5+ stars!
Lo_Panover 8 years agoI really dislike 'bbw', especially in any erotic fiction. Real turn off.... With immediate and permanent effect. Sorry.
ReiDeBastosover 8 years agoThe word "dam" means a structure used to halt, or otherwise control the flow of liquid, as in "We took a tour of Hoover Dam", or "I always use a dental dam when performing a rim job".
You used that word several times within this chapter where you should have used the word "damn" instead:
"I dam near shit myself..."
"Oh yeah, that's great. Dam you're good."
"No shit! Dam it! I must have screwed up..."
"Dam girl, you rock."
"Dam that was good, thanks."
"Dam it David, that was good. Thanks."
-Rei
Anonymousover 8 years agoYou got 5 stars for the story and 5 more for the takedown of an obvious jerk that couldn't find anything wrong but ONE typo in the whole piece. I appreciate this one all the more for it. There's some real crap on the site sometimes but this isn't one.
Looking forward to chapter 2.
