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In the meantime this will likely go down as one of them incredible Father's Days I'll ever experience and I just hope the two most important men in my life feel the same!!
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- COMMENTS
Siri26about 7 years agoI couldn't read it past the third paragraph. Your story jumps around more than a whore on Valentines day and Christmas Eve combined. Please take a comb and straighten this out, first off if it is supposed to be about your time with your father then leave out everything else. Make another story to tell about your husband and his mother, or your mother and her sisters, or your daughters and your husband or whatever. Focus on one part at a time and tell them through the end. As for grammar, punctuation, word choice, and spelling you did phenomenal/
Anonymousabout 7 years agoStory jumps all over the place, and isn't worth trying to follow.
Anonymousabout 7 years agoCome on now. Mom taught you to suck cock and your head slut I n high school. Then try and say your a good Christian?? Never mind the incest. Yes BCD married you husband becomes the head of family , your father would not still have the top place per the Bible. Never mind this is breaking all kinds of biblical laws. And again
Writ t you a good Christian. I gave up. Leave the lies and BS out and would read it
Anonymousabout 7 years agoI particularly liked Kelly's flashbacks! All in all it is a bit hard to suspend disbelief regarding the sidestory with Steve's family. However, perceived inconsistencies in the relationship between Steve and his mother stemming from previous installments are thus elegantly resolved. Anyway great story telling!
[Mom-son incest is really LEGAL in Pa. as long as participants are of legal age??]
