Transformations Ch. 05

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zoejoey
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Zoe turned to Simone. "The ultrasound."

"Two boys."

Mrs. Aames shook her head. "No... two Aames boys."

"You mean?"

"Yes baby. I think he changed in the womb. And now he's changed back."

Zoe was the first to laugh. Then her mother. "I guess I owe your grandmother a hundred pound."

"What? Why?"

"She called it. It was the ultrasound. When you had one of each, the first thing she said to me,you mark my words Sandy, change is afoot. We had a wager. She bet me Charlie wasn't a girl. I guess it's a good thing you gave them both gender neutral names and not just Jamie!"

Then Simone got the joke. "You mean..."

They both nodded.

"Like you... and your grandmother? Both of them?"

"One at least. But would you bet against the other?"

And with that, they all burst out laughing, the two twin boys just playing together on the floor like nothing in the world was wrong.

THE END

*****

Hi, so that's it. I hope I haven't disappointed anyone who stuck with it through to the end, watching Joey grow as a person to become Zoe and find her place in the world. It's been quite a journey, both for her and for me. I know some of the sex scenes with Simone are a little unrealistic but it's a story and the sex is part of the reason that you're all here anyway. Just call it poetic license and don't think too much about it!

Anyway, sorry this last part took so long to arrive. It got a bit emotionally heavy for me to write and I just had to take a break from it and write something lighter for a few days before I could come back to it. If you're interested, the story I wrote in the middle is called 'Clothed Female, Naked Sam' and it's a CFNM story (not TS/CD). You should be able to find it off my profile/story page in a few days.

Thanks for reading, thanks for commenting and thanks for voting. See you soon!

Zoe Joey Aames.

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NobleGent45NobleGent45over 1 year ago

This is possibly the best story I have ever read - and I am a big reader. You are a writer that truly deserves that description. As for those hoons who upset you so much -at BEST they are jealous and probably semi-illiterate, at worst they are clearly beneath contempt and not worthy of your work. Thank you for showing such passion. I wish you a happy and love filled life

Noble

CharletteCharlettealmost 2 years ago

Because my internal clock is so out of kilter, I spent part of three days reading this story.

But I so enjoyed most of it!

I did get a bit confused with a few small parts of the story. I might have been too tired to comprehend what i was reading.

Anywho, twixt the many pages of this writing are some very emotional, heart wrenching, heart breaking, laugh causing, titillating and down right sexy situations !

Having an open mind, even a great imagination helps when reading a story such as this.

Good work girl !

Bigman416941Bigman416941over 2 years ago

Truly amazing story pure and simple !!!!!

brianelabrianelaabout 5 years ago
Mind boggling

I am impressed, this story had me spellbound from start to finish. The final conclusion seemed so natural.

zoejoeyzoejoeyover 6 years agoAuthor
To huntsman29

I'm glad that overall you liked the story. I take your criticism on board. It is appreciated as it was constructive. I can assure you I have no love of feminists!

I just wanted to say, concerning repercussions, do you really think the Crown Prosecution Service would prosecute in this very much Daily Mail oriented public perception reality we currently reside in? I have my doubts. I think the CPS only tries cases it could reasonably be expected to win and it would be deeply unpopular to go after a sexual violence / rape victim, particularly when you consider a jury of her peers would need to reconcile their consciences afterwards. The perpetrator (yes, I know he's male, sorry!) was a violent, serial criminal. How many American TV shows have we all sat through where the lesser offender makes a deal in return for nailing a bigger catch? I don't know, maybe you're right. I guess we'll never know, it's just a story!

And also a big, big, big, big thank you to everyone who comments. I do read them all, when I check in, which I'm afraid is not all that often these days. When I do check in and see there's a new comment, it tends to be 3 months old by that point and while I would like to respond personally to every one, the chances that you'll be checking back that far down the line are quite slim, I suppose.

The commenter above just got lucky in that his comments were left on the same day as I checked in.

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