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Click hereZoe turned to Simone. "The ultrasound."
"Two boys."
Mrs. Aames shook her head. "No... two Aames boys."
"You mean?"
"Yes baby. I think he changed in the womb. And now he's changed back."
Zoe was the first to laugh. Then her mother. "I guess I owe your grandmother a hundred pound."
"What? Why?"
"She called it. It was the ultrasound. When you had one of each, the first thing she said to me,you mark my words Sandy, change is afoot. We had a wager. She bet me Charlie wasn't a girl. I guess it's a good thing you gave them both gender neutral names and not just Jamie!"
Then Simone got the joke. "You mean..."
They both nodded.
"Like you... and your grandmother? Both of them?"
"One at least. But would you bet against the other?"
And with that, they all burst out laughing, the two twin boys just playing together on the floor like nothing in the world was wrong.
THE END
*****
Hi, so that's it. I hope I haven't disappointed anyone who stuck with it through to the end, watching Joey grow as a person to become Zoe and find her place in the world. It's been quite a journey, both for her and for me. I know some of the sex scenes with Simone are a little unrealistic but it's a story and the sex is part of the reason that you're all here anyway. Just call it poetic license and don't think too much about it!
Anyway, sorry this last part took so long to arrive. It got a bit emotionally heavy for me to write and I just had to take a break from it and write something lighter for a few days before I could come back to it. If you're interested, the story I wrote in the middle is called 'Clothed Female, Naked Sam' and it's a CFNM story (not TS/CD). You should be able to find it off my profile/story page in a few days.
Thanks for reading, thanks for commenting and thanks for voting. See you soon!
Zoe Joey Aames.
- COMMENTS
NobleGent45over 1 year agoThis is possibly the best story I have ever read - and I am a big reader. You are a writer that truly deserves that description. As for those hoons who upset you so much -at BEST they are jealous and probably semi-illiterate, at worst they are clearly beneath contempt and not worthy of your work. Thank you for showing such passion. I wish you a happy and love filled life
Noble
Charlettealmost 2 years agoBecause my internal clock is so out of kilter, I spent part of three days reading this story.
But I so enjoyed most of it!
I did get a bit confused with a few small parts of the story. I might have been too tired to comprehend what i was reading.
Anywho, twixt the many pages of this writing are some very emotional, heart wrenching, heart breaking, laugh causing, titillating and down right sexy situations !
Having an open mind, even a great imagination helps when reading a story such as this.
Good work girl !
brianelaover 5 years agoI am impressed, this story had me spellbound from start to finish. The final conclusion seemed so natural.
zoejoeyover 6 years agoAuthorI'm glad that overall you liked the story. I take your criticism on board. It is appreciated as it was constructive. I can assure you I have no love of feminists!
I just wanted to say, concerning repercussions, do you really think the Crown Prosecution Service would prosecute in this very much Daily Mail oriented public perception reality we currently reside in? I have my doubts. I think the CPS only tries cases it could reasonably be expected to win and it would be deeply unpopular to go after a sexual violence / rape victim, particularly when you consider a jury of her peers would need to reconcile their consciences afterwards. The perpetrator (yes, I know he's male, sorry!) was a violent, serial criminal. How many American TV shows have we all sat through where the lesser offender makes a deal in return for nailing a bigger catch? I don't know, maybe you're right. I guess we'll never know, it's just a story!
And also a big, big, big, big thank you to everyone who comments. I do read them all, when I check in, which I'm afraid is not all that often these days. When I do check in and see there's a new comment, it tends to be 3 months old by that point and while I would like to respond personally to every one, the chances that you'll be checking back that far down the line are quite slim, I suppose.
The commenter above just got lucky in that his comments were left on the same day as I checked in.
huntsman29over 6 years agoAs a story I enjoyed reading this. The idea at it's core is not exactly new in concept, but the authors direction with it was a good one. The characters had enough depth - definitely for an erotic story on here - a decent plot, romance and emotion.
What I felt throughout though was a strong feminist anti-male vibe. It's common with 3rd wave feminism sadly where men are the rout of all darkness and women are the beacons of light.
Oh, and if the story was real it would not have had a happy ending as Zoe more than likely would have been sent to prison for around 12 years for GBH. You don't get to do that and get told you're not in trouble by the police. You most certainly are - regardless of her mitigating reasons for doing it.
zoehl96almost 7 years agoI don't think you're active on here any more, but this was such an incredibly powerful story that I felt I needed to leave feedback. I came across this while looking for some sci-fi gender swapping stories because I've read some that are pretty hot and was honestly just looking for some sexual excitement with an interesting premise. This wasn't at all what I was expecting from the first chapter, but I am glad I stuck with it. Simone reuniting with her parents actually made me tear up, which I'm pretty sure is a first for a Literotica story! It takes a rare gem of a story to make me that invested, so thank you.
Amputeesarefunabout 7 years agoI have never wished I had something so much , thank you for describing what its like to be trans . xxxx
jaquer0almost 9 years agoZoeJoey
I can't tell you how deeply moved I was by your story. I totally did not expect such a powerful, emotional tale.
I found tears welling in my eyes time and again, and I hope you will further explore these issues with a series following Charlie and Jamie as they grow up, with them simply knowing since they were toddlers that gender isn't fixed at birth, just like most other children grow up knowing that they are a boy or a girl.
But perhaps the twins don't realize (at first) and then don't really and fully comprehend (even though they "know" this intellectually) that 99.9% of the people around them can't even imagine what the twins simply *know* down to the very marrow of their bones: that the answer to the question, "are you a boy or a girl," can simply be yes.
Or no.
BTW, given the premise of this story, I'd make them identical twins, with the same exact genetic inheritance, even if at first only their grandmother suspected this might be the case. This (identical twins) could actually turn out to be quite common among the children of gender changers, as the genetic code in the just-fertilized egg finds itself trying to begin developing both as male and female at the time of the first cell division, leading to two babies developing.
This might even lead to some stories exploring gender issues in a more light-hearted way.
Anonymousabout 9 years agoI love this story. You were right; very emotionally intense. But so real. I feel like I've felt many of the emotions you depicted. I truly, desperately hope I can find the kind of love that Zoe and Simone found. Please continue writing such beautiful stories.
