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Finally, he collapsed on my chest, panting. I was panting too. When he lifted his hips, my pussy clutched his thick rod. My arms tightened around his back.
"Don't leave."
He let out a long breath. "I won't ever."
My muscles softened. My legs unwound from his waist. Will eased his cock from my soaked embrace and rolled over, pulling me half on top of him. I pressed my cheek against his muscled chest, lulled by his heartbeat, and felt his lips in my hair.
"Will," I whispered to his chest. "I love you." For a moment, he just breathed in and out. I wasn't sure he'd heard. When I raised my head, clear green eyes met mine.
"You mean that, don't you." He looked stunned. I was, too. I hadn't expected to say that. Probably the first time anyone had ever loved Will for himself, or had any idea what that self was. I nodded slowly.
"I love you too, Andie," he whispered back. The shocked expression was still on his face. He shifted to kiss me. I rested my head on his chest again.
"What about us?"
He stroked my hair back from my forehead, running his fingers through the thick waves, soothing me. "We'll just have to find out."
I curled up in his arms, warm and relaxed, while cars honked outside and streetlights flickered. The future was still a question mark. It always would be. But I knew what I wanted now, completely.
- COMMENTS
Anonymousover 1 year agoAndie is getting Maddie's leftovers....the desperate cunt had to take Maddie for a gf and so far in this chapter he never broke it off with her!!
DanishGreenEyesalmost 2 years agoHow can anyone write like this - everything and everyone comes alive and I can’t stop reading your stories. I have never felt so connected to the characters- never been so furious over their reactions and so happy when they FINALLY found each other.
I so hope you will grace us with more stories - please !!
Anonymousabout 3 years agoYou're so good at bringing us these characters, taking us to the edges of their soul and then farther than we thought possible. I skim with many stories here but not yours - I hang on to your every word.
Grognard1over 3 years agoSplendid, professional-quality writing (as are your other stories I've read). You have a truly artistic eye for plot, tempo, and tone. You should put your work in Treatment form and send it to movie studios/scriptbrokers. But, of course, keep writing and posting here!
Anonymousabout 4 years agoCouldn’t agree more with the other comments. You are a beautiful writer and I hope you do more. I find with so many of these that I’m skimming through filler text to get to the ‘good’ bit, but never with this. In such a short text I fell in love with them and their story, please add more! Maybe a little glimpse of their future??
Anonymousabout 5 years agoJust... Wow. Why is fifty shades famous and well written stuff like this is not? Made me cum, cry and more.
Good clean ending, so I'm guessing there never will be more, but like every good story, I want to follow them till they both die satisfying deaths. So maybe another reminiscent chapter maybe? Please?
Anonymousabout 5 years agoI read this about a year and a half ago and loved it (and wrote a comment then). Today I happened across it again, and it's just as compelling and just as satisfying as the first time. These characters are drawn magnificently, and the love story element is completely gripping. How I wish my love for my cousin could have worked out like theirs! You have such a gift for writing, and I hope you'll keep it up.
xxJustDanexxabout 5 years agoBoth this and the Twins Series are just perfectly emotional. I love how you put that twist of romance to your stories and how real the relationships seem. You really are a great author, who knows how to make the reader fall in love with the characters and their feelings. Keep going! <3
Anonymousalmost 6 years agoWho knew I would end up wanting more? At first I hated Will and his demanding persona but you had an amazing way of characterizing who he actually was inside and with his relationship with Andrea. I hope to see more from you because honestly I've never left a comment but this was beautiful and well worth it.
Anonymousalmost 6 years agoCan you elaborate a little more? Exactly how big wss Will's cock? In the first chapter, what else happened while Andrea was at Will's house? The exact order of groans and sighs during their sex. Other small details like that go a long way toward making a good story.
Anonymousabout 6 years agoI just came here for a good time and ended up loving these characters so much that I'm reading for the enjoyment of finding such a full story. I can't wait to read the rest of your stories and I think I saw someone comment about a book you've written that's for sale??? I'll have to check that out too! Thank you so much!
Anonymousover 6 years agoI keep coming back to your writing, and most especially this story. You are, in my opinion, the most talented author on Literotica. And I’ve downloaded your book on Amazon, eagerly awaiting more, to purchase. This story—your writing—is beautiful. I reread it every few months, and there is nothing I would change. I’d love to see where Andi and Will end up. And I’d love to see more of your short stories. Please keep writing and self-publishing! Thank you.
Anonymousover 6 years agoWhat a wonderfully well-written story this is! Your tone, pacing, characterization, dialogue---all of it was superb! Unfortunately, my deep love for my cousin was entirely one-sided (but I didn't know it) and did not have a happy ending; so I'm telling myself that Will and Andie did/do. I'm eager now to read some more of of your material. And as for cousins, 20 or 25 states in the US do permit first cousins to marry, so a little on-line research would show them where to go; and since they have different last names, few people would suspect the relationship anyway.
Anonymousover 6 years agoHonestly if this were a book Id buy it in a heartbeat it wasnt just about the sex but the story as a whole was incredible
