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What do you guys think about this chapter? Are you as shocked as me that Alejandro is the last rapist or rather the last dragon? By the way, I actually read the dragons were five but Miguel only knows of four. Are you scared to find out who the fifth one is? Do you love that Hector has got a taste of his pain? What do you think about this confession from Yvette? Do you want the story to end or for it to continue going? Who else has Carter getting on their nerves here? Why is it that whenever Miguel and Christian argue, I always get short of the stick? They are cute together though. I just hope this Carter won't ruin it for me seriously.
The theme songs for this chapter are, "Yo Soy La Doña Sin Dueño" Performed by Aracely Arambula for the series "La Dona," "Look what you made me do" by Taylor Swift, "Beautiful in white," By Westlife and "Wild thoughts" by DJ Khaled ft Rihanna and Taylor Bryson.
I hope you guys are eagerly waiting for chapter 17 like me. This story has me, the writer going crazy. Watch out for chapter 17 to find out if Miguel how Miguel is gonna Hector's life. We are almost at the peak and this story will give you an ending that you will never forget.
Iron Rose... feel the passion.
Stay tuned...
- COMMENTS
purabhabout 6 years agoHahaha, feel the passion. I am definitely feeling the passion. Simply the best
miguellaabout 6 years agoMy love for Miguel grows stronger and stronger everyday. He is just the best of all of Vanalas' characters and i swear he is.
Dexteryabout 6 years agoCarter is literally getting on my nerves. Heir or not or whether he ends up marrying Christian, i still stand with Miguel in whatever i do. There is no character like him truly and i love him. I am team sexyguell
josranvictorabout 6 years agoGod i dont get it...Anonymous wants Angel dead??? do u really know the story or u're just exposing ur ignorance??? God u're really stupid....And u want Carter to be the heir??? it seems we have fools here..fine carter is brother and has aright to the wealth,but not at the cost of Angel....God
...U wud have shown ur name and i know such astupid un following fool,DAMN U
...TEAM MIGUEL FOREVER i love u all.....let alone that 1st anonymous pig
Anonymousabout 6 years agoI'm so in love with Miguel right now. There had never been a character tough like him and i admire that in him. No matter what happens, i stand with Miguel. I hate carter because he's annoying. Team Miguel here.
Anonymousabout 6 years agoReading the story so far, I think that la Don is over stepping his boundaries. Why would he stop Brian. so far he is a control freak.
Why do I have this feeling that Brian and Brandon would betray Miguel and that Carter would be the heir, Christian would marry Carter. Finally Miguel dies or disappears forever.
josranvictorover 6 years agoi lyk him with no strings attached,that sex symbol..aman die for,my vanalas.....Do u remember the kiss??? mwaaaah.Uh??? that argument?? ..Vanalas plz reunite them,i cant bear seeing my chriguell combination being apart.......Plz,,,what does that uncle want??? why was he mad???.....Chapter 17 please come soon...Yeah Van after THE GREAT IRON ROSE/WILD FLOWER...would give us strange love??? alove of arguments,jealousy,etc plz,think about and post post soon..................................i cant forget I LOVE U
josranvictorover 6 years agothat carter is miguel's brother due to braveness,fierceness,looks(although we are too handsome and goegous than him) oh...One trait differentiates them.That is talkativeness,Carter is way loudy than one La.Dona.......True he 's getting on my nerves.Whey doesnt get his own man?? he thinks Chris-de man is his,were they lovers??? i hate him plus lawrence who claims to be in ahatred cooperation,,huhu AFOOLISH FRIEND INDEED,Btw Iris is kind,may be its due to her back ground,poor girl.Thanks to miguell for giving her ajob...Oh Alicia made me happy after knowing the truth fron Yvette,i lyk her
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God i haTe Felix,i wish he gets it rough becoz he's too foolish,he wants revenge so what?? i hate him....and does Brian scare u guys???Am afraid he may become atraitor due to felix
josranvictorover 6 years agoHector hector hectoq..Hehehehehe for this toilet i want him where he is EVEN MORE..oh he had the guts to be brutal with My Angel during the rape?? sincerely the rape its self was pain then plus the brutality!!!..Can u imagine??? those people deserve hell i..I...I some how sympathise with Alejandro becoz he changed but he also raped so he'll be punished...God am scared where the story is going My King to be frank....Hahahaha but Miguell can control!!! just lyk Antonio, hector also got drawn and driven away by the beauty.Hehehe and am sure that is the weapon Miguell uses but hey..Afool is afool hector didnt see that...Thanks to his stupid bulge and rosewood activities,we got him,hehehehehd
josranvictorover 6 years agoGOD,how comes that Alejandro is among the rapist-killer group 'the dragons'??? eeeeh eeh for sure the guy is serious he was among the rapists!!! ...to make matters worse he works with Miguell??!!!,Jesus...I cant even try to believe that one of our allies was arapist?? what is Angel gona do if he finds out??
...And am even scared to know the next rapist,what if the result comes when Brandon is fifth??? oh MY GOD,Vanalas u wana kill me....This is one hell of atwisted story..For sure every chapter proves the worthiness of the tittle i gave to u-CROWNED KING OF WRITERS...GOD THE GUY IS JUST TOO MUCH
Anonymousover 6 years agoI gotta admit, I'm not reading this story because the chapters are too long. I'm just astonished to see how fast you write.
