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Click hereWhat do you guys think about this chapter? Are you as shocked as me that Alejandro is the last rapist or rather the last dragon? By the way, I actually read the dragons were five but Miguel only knows of four. Are you scared to find out who the fifth one is? Do you love that Hector has got a taste of his pain? What do you think about this confession from Yvette? Do you want the story to end or for it to continue going? Who else has Carter getting on their nerves here? Why is it that whenever Miguel and Christian argue, I always get short of the stick? They are cute together though. I just hope this Carter won't ruin it for me seriously.
The theme songs for this chapter are, "Yo Soy La Doña Sin Dueño" Performed by Aracely Arambula for the series "La Dona," "Look what you made me do" by Taylor Swift, "Beautiful in white," By Westlife and "Wild thoughts" by DJ Khaled ft Rihanna and Taylor Bryson.
I hope you guys are eagerly waiting for chapter 17 like me. This story has me, the writer going crazy. Watch out for chapter 17 to find out if Miguel how Miguel is gonna Hector's life. We are almost at the peak and this story will give you an ending that you will never forget.
Iron Rose... feel the passion.
Stay tuned...
Hahaha, feel the passion. I am definitely feeling the passion. Simply the best
My love for Miguel grows stronger and stronger everyday. He is just the best of all of Vanalas' characters and i swear he is.
Carter is literally getting on my nerves. Heir or not or whether he ends up marrying Christian, i still stand with Miguel in whatever i do. There is no character like him truly and i love him. I am team sexyguell
God i dont get it...Anonymous wants Angel dead??? do u really know the story or u're just exposing ur ignorance??? God u're really stupid....And u want Carter to be the heir??? it seems we have fools here..fine carter is brother and has aright to the wealth,but not at the cost of Angel....God
...U wud have shown ur name and i know such astupid un following fool,DAMN U
...TEAM MIGUEL FOREVER i love u all.....let alone that 1st anonymous pig
I'm so in love with Miguel right now. There had never been a character tough like him and i admire that in him. No matter what happens, i stand with Miguel. I hate carter because he's annoying. Team Miguel here.
Reading the story so far, I think that la Don is over stepping his boundaries. Why would he stop Brian. so far he is a control freak.
Why do I have this feeling that Brian and Brandon would betray Miguel and that Carter would be the heir, Christian would marry Carter. Finally Miguel dies or disappears forever.
i lyk him with no strings attached,that sex symbol..aman die for,my vanalas.....Do u remember the kiss??? mwaaaah.Uh??? that argument?? ..Vanalas plz reunite them,i cant bear seeing my chriguell combination being apart.......Plz,,,what does that uncle want??? why was he mad???.....Chapter 17 please come soon...Yeah Van after THE GREAT IRON ROSE/WILD FLOWER...would give us strange love??? alove of arguments,jealousy,etc plz,think about and post post soon..................................i cant forget I LOVE U