An Incest Birthday Ch. 27

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"Yeah, hand me my skirt will you? One time naked outside is enough."

"Aren't you going to put back on your bikini bottoms?" Ashley asked.

"Not tonight. I'm still aching," Rita said as she slid on her skirt.

"You're not the only one..." Ashley said almost under her breath.

A light bulb went off in my head. "Ok, I can honestly say this was fun, but we should go," I said.

"Yeah we definitely need to go, now!" Rita said almost anxious.

Rita and Ashley hugged it out. "Fresh start, you definitely earned it."

I hugged her and she gave me a kiss on my cheek, then we grabbed our stuff and headed for the door with Ashley right behind us.

"I'll see you guys later, be careful on the drive home," Ashley said.

"OH WE WILL!" Rita yelled back at her. "Let's go now, I'm so fucking horny I can't stand it!"

"You want me to eat you out better than she did?" I teased.

"No I want you to fuck the shit out of me, let's go we're wasting time!"

"What about dad? The way you're all riled up you're not gonna be quiet."

"We're gonna tell him about us anyway, if he walks in on us we kill two birds with one stone."

We got in the car and Ashley went back into the house but looked out the window to make sure we drove off and didn't come back for yet another unexpected drop-in. Another thought popped in my head, concerning Rita's current horny as shit state, the car was roomy enough, and even though there was a street light above us, it didn't light up the whole car, so I thought why not. I left the keys in the ignition and just sat there.

"Why are you still sitting here let's GO!" Rita yelled.

"We don't have to go all the way home, there's plenty of room right here."

It didn't take her long to scramble into my lap and smash her lips to mine. I could feel the heat coming from her pantyless crotch, it was like she was burning a hole right through my shorts, which she was frantically trying to get off. I let the seat back to give her more room.

"Jesus, what the hell did she do to you?" I asked, getting my clothes ripped off.

"I don't know, but I was already horny before, and she added to it."

"But you came, shouldn't you at least have calmed down a little?"

"This is one of those times where I need a cock in me, oral isn't gonna fix this."

"You don't usually get like this..."

"Yeah I do, remember in the pool at the cabin, or when I went all femdom on you, and in the woods that one time? Fucking finally!" she said as she finally got me out of my shorts.

She stroked my cock to make sure it was hard as she could get it, but I was already way ahead of her. Since she knew she was hella wet she got right over my cock and immediately sat down on it, and when she did the biggest look of orgasmic relief came across her face.

"Fuuuuuuuuuck yes! God I needed that!" Rita groaned in pleasure.

"You're just getting started aren't you?" I asked, somewhat nervous.

She didn't say anything, she just flipped her hair back and smiled at me. She held on to the seat and rode me as hard as she could being confined to such a small space, and even by that she was still riding me pretty hard. She didn't bother taking her skirt off, she just flipped it upwards and lifted her shirt over her tits and slammed herself down on me as hard as she could. I thought about the other times she said she'd gotten crazy, like in the pool, I had to be completely rough with her before she came and calmed down, and I wondered if I'd be going down that path again. I looked over at the window Ashley was at, she was still standing there, and not only that, she was playing with herself. She looked like she was staring at us intently and had a hand on her tit and the other in her pants, and her arm was moving pretty fast.

"Ashley's watching us," I said as I turned back to Rita.

"Let her watch, I don't care. She can't see too much anyway."

She leaned down on me and kissed me again, then the kissing quickly turned into her biting my lip, and then that turned into her sucking at my neck trying to give me a hickey.

"If you fuck me any harder Rita you're gonna break the seat," I said.

"I can't help it, it's like my body isn't my body anymore!"

It took all my strength to stop her from fucking me. She was just about to explode on me when I sort of pushed her over the front seats into the back and hopped over after her. We had a little more space to work with in the back so we laid down as best we could and I got between her legs and slammed right back into her. I pulled her legs up so her whole body fit on the seat and kneeled down over her and fucked her hard, just like she wanted. I had to keep a foot on the floor and my knee on the seat just to keep the leverage I had, but it gave me the space I needed to really drive into her.

"Oh! Yes! Oh! That's it! Fuck me! Harder! Harder! Harder!" Rita screamed.

"With each word she said her voice got a little louder, and I was about to cover her mouth like I did with mom, but then she bit her lip, closed her eyes, and tried her best to be quiet. I wanted to bend her over and fuck her doggystyle, but that was damn near impossible in this car, and even if we managed it, it would definitely be uncomfortable without us having to poke our head out of a window.

"Switch back, I wanna get back on top," Rita said cutting through my thoughts.

We didn't really switch, I just pulled her up, scooted towards her side of the car and she pushed me back down, now with her riding me the same way I was fucking her, except I had my legs down and was more bunched up than she was, but awkwardness I'd gladly suffer through.

"She's still watching us fuck, she hasn't taken her eyes off of us for a second," Rita said.

"In a way she's getting what she wanted, without actually getting it."

"You can explain that to me later when I'm not focused on your cock tearing me apart."

"Hey this is exactly what you wanted, you're on top remember?"

"That wasn't a complaint," she grinned.

I sat up and put my back against the seat, which now gave us both tons more space to be physical. Her lips found mine again as I helped her sit all the way down on my cock over and over. This time I bit her lip and enjoyed it as she moaned out in pleasure. Like she said before, Ashley was still at the window, but now her panties were clearly gone and she looked to be fingering herself furiously.

"You like her watching us don't you? You keep looking over there."

"I can say the same for you, you get a new rush of energy every time you catch her."

"Well let's give her something to look at, and anyone else watching for that matter."

She turned the light on in the car, now exposing us to anyone who could see and went back to riding me. She saw the look on my face and just smiled, which in turn made me smile, and made us both fuck each other harder.

"Come on baby, fuck me as hard as you can, make me feel that cock!"

I sunk down in the seat and grabbed her waist, lifting her off me a little and thrust myself into her. Each time our skin met it sounded like a loud clap followed by a groan from Rita. I pulled all the way out to the tip and slammed back in with full force knowing that's exactly what she wanted, what she needed, and Ashley probably had a perfect view of it, well at least as good a view as she could get from behind the window.

"Keep going Randy, I'm gonna come again, keep fucking me!"

I was in a sensory overload. Our clapping skin echoed over and over with each thrust as her tits bounced around in my face, her pussy aroma was emanating and had completely covered the car we were in, her pussy itself was gripping me tighter and tighter with each passing second, and her warm juice was slowly dripping on my legs, signaling she was on the brink of orgasm.

I couldn't go any faster because the way I was sitting was exerting so much energy, but I kept the pace as long as I could, hoping she came before I lost all my energy. She cradled my neck and held on to me, blocking my view of everything around me with her hair and causing me to focus solely on my cock slamming into her. She slid down my body and bit into my neck which made me wrap my arms around her back, which meant less stress, which meant faster fucking. It didn't take much longer in this position before her pussy clamped down on me so hard I had no choice but to stop fucking her as she came all over me.

"Oh god! Yes! Ugh, ugh, ugh, oh my god!" Rita groaned as her orgasm hit her.

I held on to her hard as she jerked in place while her warm fluids ran down my legs and into the seats, luckily we had a leather cover over them so cleanup wouldn't be too bad. We stayed like that until she calmed down, which surprisingly didn't take long at all. She climbed off me and sat in the seat next to me, hair deshelved, clothes all askew, smelling of sex and a crotch still wet from having just come, and she had the biggest smile on her face.

"I think I'm all better now," she said in a cutesy voice.

"Only you can go from being a dominatrix to the girl next door in a matter of seconds."

"You love it and you know it. Now probably would be a good time to head home though."

"Yeah before mom starts to worry. Can you pass me my shorts from the front seat?"

"Oh right, I think I left my bikini panties in Ashley's house."

"I'll get them," I said as I pulled on my shorts. "Start the car up, I'll be right back."

I went up to the door, which was still open and pushed it open. Ashley was down on the floor still in front of the window breathing heavy from what looked like having just come. I smiled as I looked for Rita's panties and found them on the floor in front of the couch Ashley gave her head on. I picked them up and headed for the door, stopping at Ashley who looked up at me from the floor with a look of disbelief, but satisfaction at the same time.

"Now we're even."

I got back in the car and turned around so we could head back the way we came.

Rita rolled down her window and waved at Ashley as we drove off. "BYE ASHLEY!"

The fresh air was much needed, both because the smell of sex was all over the car, and it was so damn hot being in there having sex with the windows up. Rita laid back in her seat, twirling her messed up hair on one of her fingers as we cruised back to the house.

"If I had a cigarette, I'd be smoking it right now," Rita said.

"I wish I had my phone on me to record the look on Ashley's face when I went back in."

"What did she look like?"

"Like she couldn't believe what she saw. She definitely came when we did. She was crumbled up on the floor. She probably won't be going to sleep at all tonight."

"Good, I now feel a hundred times better about her. Today was a good day."

"Today was a GREAT day like you said it was gonna be. We found out for sure she's genuinely changed, you got your revenge by getting even with her, and I got mine by messing with her head, and we got to mess with the other three too. We found out stuff, we made other people do stuff, we fucking streaked through the neighborhood, mellowed out with some alcohol in a hot tub, and finished the night off with sex, definitely a top ten among nights."

"Don't forget the mind blowing sex we just had."

"Yeah I just said that," I laughed.

"Oh, I must still be feeling it then. We always have the most amazing sex."

"We're not the boring sex type, and judging by everyone else's answers, neither are they. We should try sex in some of the places they said, like in the library."

"I like that Eiffel Tower one, but what's the chances of us going to Paris?"

"There were plenty others, whenever you're feeling like, just pick one, I'm all in."

"I'm already planning them out in my head now..."

We pulled up to the house a while later around 11:30. We walked in to all three of them watching the Walking Dead marathon, they didn't even look tired, not even a little bit.

"Look who's finally home! How was Ashley's? Anything we need to know?" Aunt Lisa asked.

"Nothing bad, everything went almost perfect. We found out for sure Ashley is definitely a changed woman, we'll tell you about it later. What's going on here?" I asked.

"What, how do you know for sure she's a changed woman?" mom asked.

"She took a lie detector test, an actual for real lie detector test, and pretty much aced it."

"You sure she didn't rig it or anything?" Aunt Lisa asked.

"We're positive. We reset it and everything, it was legit," Rita said.

"Ok, if you're sure, then I guess its ok. You gonna let her come back over here?"

"We're not sure on all that yet, maybe. What are you guys still doing up?" I asked.

" Watching The Walking Dead, we didn't realize this show was that good!" dad said.

"Don't you have to go to work in the morning dad?" Rita asked.

"I'll be fine, I'm a partner now remember? I can be a little late, I can even miss a day."

"You've been watching it all day? What season are you in?"

"Like halfway through season two, it picks up really fast," mom said.

"It's on Netflix so if you go they stop showing it on TV you can watch the rest of the seasons on there. We're gonna go to bed, it's been a long, tiring day," I said.

"Yeah who's old now! Kids going to bed while the adults stay up late," dad said. We laughed as they'd finally got us back for all the jokes we cracked on them. To tell the truth, we weren't even really tired, we just wanted to get back before they started to worry.

"You know what, we're not tired, make room for us," I said.

"You're gonna stay up and watch it with us?" Aunt Lisa asked.

"Why not, we don't watch TV a lot together, and we're all here, so zombies it is."

"Well come on then, this couch is big enough for the five of us to squeeze on it," mom said.

"I'll go put on my pajamas and grab some blankets," Rita said.

"And I'll put on some more popcorn since you finished off three bowls of it," I followed.

I was fine staying in the clothes I had on, but I knew Rita only went to change because she didn't have any panties on, in fact they were still in my pocket. I put on two more bags of popcorn and grabbed a six-pack of pops from the fridge and went back out to the living room, where Rita was just coming down the stairs with two big blankets from our room.

"Ok make room!" Rita said as she jumped between mom and dad and fit herself in.

I sat the popcorn and pop on the table and sat between mom and Aunt Lisa. It was a tight fit at first, but with a little adjusting we managed to fit in pretty comfortably. We haven't had any time like this together lately, so it was nice to finally make time for each other.

I turned on the Netflix to the episode where they left off and waited until everyone was ready before I hit play. "Midnight on a weekday and we're up watching the Walking Dead," I laughed.

"At least it's not an actual zombie apocalypse, Lisa would be the first one to go," mom laughed.

"What? How do you figure me?"

"You're the slowest runner and you can't shoot water in a swimming pool."

"I am not the slowest runner! And that's what shotguns are for!"

"Well you definitely won't outrun me, Rita or Randy," dad said.

"Please, I'm a survivor, I..."

"I'm not gon give up, I'm not gon stop, I'm gon work harder!" Rita teased.

Aunt Lisa reached over me and mom to try to get at Rita, who used dad as a shield. "Don't hide behind him, your daddy isn't gonna save you this time!"

We were all smashing into each other trying not to get caught in the middle of their little war, but it only made Aunt Lisa try harder to get her and Rita try harder to stay away. We all got poked, slapped, pinched and whatnot, but we were all laughing together, we were having fun. There was no ulterior motive, no sex involved, no secret plot, it was just us, having fun as a family. I cherished moments like these. Whatever Rita and I decided to do in the future, we would make sure we had more moments like this one, but for now, even if it was something as simple as eating dinner together, we would make good of our time, as a family.

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AnonymousAnonymousover 5 years ago
very good

Ill admit I was skeptical of ashley having a different motive but glad they could all be friends.

AnonymousAnonymousover 9 years ago

can't wait till the next chapter I've enjoyed the story and can't wait for more

KorianderKorianderover 9 years ago
Enjoyed it until chapter 19

I enjoyed reading your story until chapter 19. I did feel from the beginning that introducing Ashley was a mistake. I agree with 'Anonymous' below that you failed to portray Ashley in a way so her change of character would be believable and acceptable by the audience.

You say you're writing from personal experience, that you have seen such a change in character happen. Well, there is no arguing with that. But that doesn't help your audience, who do not share your personal experience, to accept Ashley after what they have seen her do.

The shoot-out in the ice-cream shop (a definite low point of your tale) did not convince me to change my mind about Ashley. If anything, it confirmed my loathing for her. I think that basing a fundamental character change on a shoot-out scene and some 'regret' later is nothing but cliché.

If you push your audience that far into hating a character, there is no way you can turn that around without breaking suspense of disbelief. Most people aren't so forgiving. Most people just stop caring at some point.

I think the turn your storyline took when Ashley took over just ruined the whole series. The original storyline that revolved about the sister, mother, aunt and later Stephanie and Marie held so much promise. You left so many avenues in that setup unexplored.

Instead you came up with an annoying 'antagonist'. I'm not entirely sure why you felt this story needed one. It was a fun and easy incest story before that. But this turned the series into a drama of the quality you expect to see in a telenovela on TV.

The constant annoyance of Ashley, the shoot-out action, the melodramatic, emotional turmoil you delivered in the final chapters were so distracting and pointless, it was simply impossible to enjoy the sex in the final chapters.

For the future, my advice would be to keep your drama and melancholy in check. There's nothing better than a little drama and emotion in erotica, but you clearly went overboard with it here.

Koriander

AnonymousAnonymousover 9 years ago
lie detector

Now all Ashley has to do is prove she didn't trajn herself to slow her breathing and heart rate on command so she could fool the machine

AnonymousAnonymousover 9 years ago

Kevin you have written a great story. As a romantic please have Randy stand up for himself and Rita and say no more to his mother and aunt. That plot point is driving me insane. Randy and Rita love each other so much and the mother and aunt basically for him to screw them, he always initially resists. It would also rock if Rita did the same thing. And no screwing Stephanie or Chris either. Just Rita and Randy happily ever after. Cant wait to read the final 8 chapters

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