Creating a Redheaded Monster Ch. 01

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Mona was in heaven. The couple was doing wonders to her body, and she quickly rose to start her continuous crescendo. A day ago these feelings were a complete unknown, but now Mona lusted toward them like they kept her alive! Scot's tongue and fingers were building up the explosion in her quickly, and Emma pinching and twisting her nipple set it off!

Mona actually screamed out as she came! A chill ran up Emma's spine hearing the sudden vocal onslaught and she ground down on Scot, squeezing him... she was so close! It was too much for Scot, and he pushed up his hips into his fiancé, shooting a powerful load into her. All three bucked in orgasmic glory, actually feeling connected by the convulsions wracking them.

Mona didn't stop. Emma didn't stop. Scot had to fight the super sensitive feeling, allowing himself to be used for Emma's pleasure. She seemed to be trying to match Mona's continuous orgasm.

Mona's mouth latched onto one of Emma's breasts when she threw her head back in orgasm. Mona loved the sensation of Emma's breast, one of her own hands pulling on her own nipple at the same time. This time it felt to Mona like she was riding a roller coaster up and down continuous hills; she felt her orgasm peak and valley, with the rush of intense pleasure every time she went down the hill! Scot's tongue was wonderful!

Emma somehow kept Scot hard and was enjoying her grind on him. The thrill of exploding with another woman, and the feeling of her filled pussy was intense! Mona's mouth on her breast... wow! Emma's brain was on overload, her body burning with desire, her entire being driving by the intense pleasure she was feeling!

Scot couldn't believe that he could push past the sensitivity, but he was building again. He was pushing up into Emma and getting a very sore jaw and face, but every moment was worth it! The muffled sounds from above were only fueling him. So close... so ready... a thought... he had to hold on, hold out... make... them... feel... good...

Emma was losing her will to continue... no, her strength. She reached out for Mona and held her shoulders, but it wasn't enough. The girl was only six years younger and somehow kept going and going... "Fuck! Too much!" Emma's brain screamed while she started to collapse onto Mona.

Mona felt Emma reaching out to her shoulders, but couldn't believe it when Emma fell against her. "NOOOO!!!!" Mona yelled out while she was being knocked from her perch.

Scot felt the massive shift above him while the dominoes fell. He had his opportunity and took it. "Get up! Kneel on the floor!" He barked out to both of them. Mona scrambled away and helped Emma move. "Help her sit up!" he told Mona, pointing to the floor. Scot kept stroking himself while Mona complied. "Put your face next to hers!"

Mona quickly complied, not knowing what was about to happen. When Scot pushed his dick close to their faces, she knew! Scot erupted thick ropes of semen across Mona's face, then Emma's, then wherever Mona directed the rest. Mona screamed in joy while Emma roused and smiled.

Scot looked down at his ladies and smiled, seeing their painted faces and hair. The classic porn blow wasn't his thing, but he finally realized why it was so popular!

Besides, having two frosted redheads staring up at you just below your penis is a beauty beyond words!

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Mona has a long way to go to start to heal mentally, and hopefully Scot and Emma haven't damaged that process. But her sexual journey has barely started... Will the monster be unleashed and impossible to control? Will Scot and Emma remember to share the good news of their engagement with their parents and families? All this and more in the next chapter!

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ScottishTexanScottishTexanover 1 year ago

I gave this a five in spite of the poor character building on Mona, so it really deserves a four instead. She's supposed to be a mentally distraught 18/19 year old homeless girl. But there were times that the dialog you gave to her and the actions you assigned to her, painted her as someone 12 to 14 years old. Someone who has suffered from a traumatic event like Mona did, doesn't regress into childish behavior. Her speech impediment was accurately done, so that's not what I'm specifically taking issues with. I just feel like you had trouble trying to accurately portray someone like Mona and took her character in the wrong direction. 😕

I'm absolutely loving Emma wanting Mona to be part of the family, sharing her love with Scot. I think that just about every red blooded male would love to be married to someone like her. 5/5

AnonymousAnonymousalmost 7 years ago

Amazing sex in an unbelievably creative context. Some of the best writing I have encountered. The serial tension is measured but powerfully intense. You draw out the suspense in breathtaking ways.

AnonymousAnonymousalmost 7 years ago
Great story.

jsmangisjsmangisabout 7 years ago
Very Hot!

Great story, it grabs you and places you under it's spell.

ender2k2kender2k2kabout 7 years ago
Good story

Very interesting characters. I look forward to the next chapter

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