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The world is certainly a strange place; with many different cultures and nations as well as governments and leaders. If I could bring Calin somewhere else, to the mountains up north or to Canada, would our love still exist through all the obstacles we face? What if she were to be captured? Would I be strong enough to free here? To protect her? Only with my powers as a Protector would I be able to do that, an apprentice at that, but if Quin Shun has taught me one thing in my time in training, is that no one is powerless, unless you believe you are. A regular person could be a national hero if he has the capabilities and hope he can do it.
So many questions, so many answers left unseen. Is it best to wait for them to come to me, or for me to search them out? As long as I am with Calin, my mate that is everything I will ever need to be happy, for there is one thing I will never do to her. I will never hurt her; never make her cry, never abuse her, never humiliate her, and above all, I will always be there for her in her time of need.
- COMMENTS
Galadreyilover 8 years agoYou've got a decent plot and interesting enough story to keep me reading but there's still a few things that are flat out annoying. I don't care what dimensions his penis is, or how much it grows by the numbers. Numbers in that area are a turnoff for me I can't stand it when someone is being overanalytical about sex. The other annoying thing is how certain things you drag on and on and on. Grammatical errors get fixed through time and practice. So far you've got a great thing going keep it up.
Anonymousover 9 years agoHey wake the hell up you've already posted this chapter once before. Then you reposted it again the very next day. I like what you have got down so far but you really need to work on your writing skills. With the same chapter being posted the second time are you smoking marijuana or on crack or something. Get your head out of your butt and back on your shoulders dum dum.
Anonymousover 9 years agoBut if there's ay way to edit the story afterwards, please change fertile/infertile to fertilized/unfertilized. There's a huge difference: Fertile means able to have offspring (so that'd mean the eggs would be ready to have eggs themselves), while fertilized is the word you were looking for.
