Mom Witnesses an Incestuous Kiss

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Shrug. I seldom planned that far in advance. But I'd liked Stefan and I was kind of curious about how the hippies once lived.

"Well keep it in mind. From our family there'll be Rasmus, Greta, Tim and Sheila; Rose, Bjorn and Anders; and I expect that Stefan and Stefanie will join us at least for a day or so."

Yikes. What kind of Thanksgiving was this going to be? Tim was boning his mother; Aunt Shirley had had threesomes with her son and his girlfriend; and then there was Mom and me. All this in a hippie communal setting? I'd have to see.

My mother and I hit the road and I settled back to contemplate the weekend's events and what lay in store for the rest of the summer. My mother was driving and started in.

"So Carlos. Do you think you'll join me in the home nudity now?" big smile on her face.

"I suppose so now. I guess we'll be seeing a lot of each other naked for the rest of the summer."

Squeal of glee followed by a torrent of happy chatter but I wasn't paying attention. Then sharp braking, fishtailing and a shriek. Fuck! What just happened? I looked back to see who we just ran over.

"Look Carlos. A squirrel!"

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bob3641223bob364122312 days ago

this was a hot story, i love build ups, and this had it all, i hope there is a continuation the the Hippie party. 5 star

a_reader_from_germanya_reader_from_germanyover 2 years ago

Not as good as the other 3 or 4 of your stories I read until now. Carlos let it go pretty far, including the mutual masturbation in the shower, before he puts his food down, resulting in his mother taking some psychoactive drugs. What a character to let it come to this.

On the other hand I already wasn't to keen on some of the author's descriptions in other stories, about pussy lips being 'not too long' (or to thin, to thick). What the heck is that even supposed to mean? But in this story "the guy" is hooked up on fish hook shaped nipples? What a strange fascination. It's a fetish I never even read or heard about and is better left out of a story, unless it's especially catering to people with the same kink, which I guess are some rare species in this case. I find it rather distracting if not disturbing, next you tell us about a guy fascinated with a girl with a horizontally oriented slit down there...

Some of the very best authors here who write stories about relationships, emotions, conflicts and so on even refrain almost completely from describing distinct bodily features....

racfguyracfguyalmost 3 years ago

Didn't like it much. Anita is a PITA busybody with an overactive imagination. The son is a wuss. Couldn't get past the first page. Not as good as your other stories.

AnonymousAnonymousabout 4 years ago
So you write crap until they play spin the bottle?

OMG! Until the Spin the bottle session I absolutely hated Carlos. You wrote this character like a spineless nitwit who could be jerking off with mom's wet panties one minute and refusing to let her touch his cock the next. Sexy dialog and actions from mom roll out like honey and Carlos is offended? Jesus H Christ! This must be what pegging is like. Are you just screwing with us? Clearly you are capable of writing erotic stories and sustaining a storyline then providing new characters and plot twists building to a climax. Perfect ending, wrapping up one story while leaving the door open to new characters in foreshadowed erotic situations. This tells me you know what you are doing but the first chapters of this story make me wonder if a brilliant second half justifies a look at your future works.

SMH

AnonymousAnonymousabout 5 years ago
Too......

Took too long to get to anything good. A snail reads faster than you develop this story. I fell asleep somewhere on page 2.

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