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As he usually did when thinking intensely about something, the thumb on his right hand bent to the base of his middle finger to rotate the diamond ring around his digit. It was just a little habit that had formed since winning the ring in a five card draw game about a year ago. His eyes opened wide as he sat up straight. His gazed at his right palm, the fingers spread wide. His $10,000 diamond ring was gone! "FUCK!"
A moment later his cell started ringing.
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- COMMENTS
neosamover 8 years agoI have read the original story
and yurs is different than the original genre..but its fantastic
u have amazing writing skills ,,the seduction part was written very beautifully and the dialogs between her and the real father is really very humorous.. i loved it !!
Please do write more such stories
Thanks for sharing
Neo
