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I slide my cock into your asshole and fuck it for about 10 minutes before I fill it with hot cum as you are shoving your tongue down my throat. I pull out of your asshole and we get back in the shower and clean up.
After we shower, we dress, get our new video and go to our car for the drive back home which after the week of adventure we have had, it will seem like a fast trip back.
- COMMENTS
Anonymousover 3 years agoThis is a good romance story that never slows down, but it suffers from a weak introduction and lack of character development. The proportion of plot to love scenes is fine, but the use of the present tense (as opposed to the past tense) is not the best grammar for narrating a story, particularly a romance story such as this.
Anonymousover 10 years agoI always wonder why one character is telling the other character what they did, in this case in great detail, nobody would remember it all, would they? And she's not ever there to hear. It's wearying for the reader. I guess if it turns your crank. It's a really long stroke job, which I don;t say as a pejorative, is all well and good for this site, but as written probably won't have a wide appeal. Well at least no to me.
Give me some narration, develop the characters, create some conflict and drama, let us see whats going on in their heads, toss in some humor and the sex. That's more interesting.
