Mrs. Ferrell

Very, very 🔥. Very well written. But there was a lot of potential for extending the story. Would have loved more of the liaison between the two. And her rear hole was yet to be explored.

Fantastic story. Excellent detail. Super fun to read!! Thank you!

Nice Story. I have read your other stories. This one is the best. You should continue the story.

Fantastic writing and very erotic. Thank you.

Pretty hot story with a lot of comma issues, as if the 18 year old wrote it but erotic enough for 5 stars.

I enjoyed the story. it was very detailed and believable. I enjoyed experiencing both POV. The lead up was good and the climax was right on time and on point. looking forward to reading more of this, I hope it forms into a nice series cause now her son has to manage to lose his virginity now.

Amateur story writing, so a number of issues, but good flow, well put together. Fun to read. Gotta love Mrs Ferrell. If only I had one next door! :)

Too much info on Mrs. Ferrell's and not enough time on her time with tryst with the best friend and Emily. Should have spent more time on that because it is feature plot of this story. I find too much

B.S. at the beginning and you forget about the real plot. Get your outline balanced out and spend just as much time on finality, you just left it not finished.

I don’t like cheating but the author made sure to present enough evidence to excuse her. I accepted a revenge fuck. Of course for some reason the boy’s cock had to e humongous in size. Why has that become the norm in these stories and of course in almost all pornographic videos? It’s like us normal sized men can’t get it done.

Bill S.

Great story, altho the fixation on cock size is a bit silly, bit of a distraction really.

Appeared to be a great start to an interesting series with much more to tell, but unfortunately not. Otherwise a well thought out and written story. I appreciate your and your Muse's imagination and abilities to bring it to your story. Thank you for sharing your vision and talents.