My Birthday Surprise

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Meghan pushed me back and down on to the bed, undid my belt, pulled my dress pants down my legs and threw then into the corner of the room. She then hooked her thumbs into the bottom of my boxer-briefs and began sliding them down my legs, they too were discarded to the corner of the room. "Eeewww" she said, "those are soaked, did you cum in your pants?" I looked at her and laughed and said, "what do you think?" We laughed together for a second and then Meghan moved herself between my legs which we still hanging off the end of the bed.

She moved her head into my crotch and took a long hard lick from my choda up to the tip of my cock. I felt electricity shoot through my body and thought I was going to cum right there. I said, "I'm not going to last very long here, I'm super fucking horny and I really want to come" to which she responded, "that's OK" and went back to work licking up and down my shaft. My hot little slut was finally working my over-stiffened tool and I was in heaven, but knowing I was not going to last too long I said, "honey, I want to cum in your pussy." She looked up at me from her position between my legs and smiled, never stopping her up and down pumping of my shaft and said, "honey, my pussy belongs to Glenn, I gave it to him. He is my boyfriend now and I want to save my pussy just for him, you understand don't you?" When she had ended her sentence she immediately wrapped her mouth tightly around the head of my cock, not evening waiting for a response from me to her question, she knew the answer anyway.

Hearing the words I thought I heard earlier right out of my wife's mouth made it so real and the emotions were simply too much for me to control any longer. I threw my head back and began cumming hard, I mean really hard right into Meghan's well used mouth and throat. The release was so intense I could hardly believe it, I was in pain and ecstasy at the same time. My legs pulled up of the floor as the intensity of my orgasm made my abs flex uncontrollably, I was screaming as my seed pumped out of me into my wife's waiting mouth. My orgasm was so intense it made my ears ring and my heart skip a beat or two, I knew I must be shooting the load of the century into Meghan but she did not seem to flinch and nothing was leaking out of her mouth. Normally she allows my cum to fall back out of her mouth as it collects pump after pump, either not able to or wanting to swallow. But tonight was different.

What seemed like minutes later I was finally done my orgasm and a wave of satisfaction and exhaustion came over my body. I opened my eyes again and looked down my body at Meghan, she was looking me straight in the eyes, my cock still tightly sealed in her mouth. I heard her swallow deeply and noticed that not a drop of my spirit had escaped her oral grip on my shaft. She pulled her head back and with one final audible pop released my cock from her mouth. It fell back to my body having been fully drained. Meghan looked up at me and smiled. I barely had the energy to smile back at her, but I did anyway. "I love you" she said to me and then I leaned my head back onto the bed and rested. I felt her push herself up from between my legs and heard her walk out of the room, closing the door behind her as she left. A few moments later I heard the sound of the shower in our room come on. Completely spent I closed my eyes and passed out as the post coitus sensations washed over my body.

I don't know how long I was passed out, but the next thing I heard was the door to the spare bedroom opening up once again. There in the doorway was Meghan, fully dressed in her tight little gap jeans and a sexy little top. I smiled at her and she smiled back at me. Damn, she looked good in those jeans.

"I'm heading out" she said to me. "Oh" I said back, "where are you going?"

"I'm going to Glenn's for the weekend, I'll be back Sunday night, late" she continued, "There's some dinner for you in the kitchen fridge and I bought some beer for you and put it in the bar fridge." "Oh" I replied.

"I love you so much, enjoy your relaxing weekend" she said, then she walked into the room and kissed me, "maybe I'll send you some pictures" and she walked back out of the room, "we'll just see how it goes."

"OK, bye, I love you." I responded as I watched her round the corner and head down the stairs. A few seconds later I heard the door close and the house was silent.

I laid there on the bed for probably another ten or fifteen minutes after my wife left the house with her young, studly lover and then I sat up. I got up and walked to our bedroom noticing the sheets were all pushed down to the bottom and there was a wet-spot about ten inches around right in the middle. I laughed to myself and thought, wow, that must have been one hell of an orgasm. Then I walked into the closet to grab my comfy pants and pulled them on. I threw my now well-wrinkled dress shirt into the laundry bin and grabbed a fresh white t-shirt out of my dresser.

Now what, I wondered. I then noticed my MacBook sitting on the night-table and thought to myself, I'm going to catch up on that diary, that's what I'm going to do!

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AnonymousAnonymous14 days ago

Wow! That was pretty hot - if you were a participant. Find a bit of conflict with the husband thinking this was not a cuckolding situation. Respectful? No humiliation? Let's look at a couple of quotes.

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“This is not a cuckolding thing for me, I do not wish to be humiliated or denigrated and she has never, ever done that to me. She, and the partners she has been with that were aware of our situation were always very respectful. “

‘… where Meghan can be heard taunting me with "do you like seeing my boyfriends cum running out of my pussy?" and "I think this makes me his now doesn't it?" ’

“I wish I knew before now how good a real cock would feel in my ass. “

"I saved my pussy for you Glenn, I didn't want any of them to fuck me in there because my pussy belongs to you now."

... "honey, my pussy belongs to Glenn, I gave it to him. He is my boyfriend now and I want to save my pussy just for him, you understand don't you?"

"I'm going to Glenn's for the weekend, I'll be back Sunday night, late"

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Sure, leaving the husband alone for his birthday weekend is very respectful - NOT! Cutting off her husband from her pussy is loving and respectful - NOT! Don whining and taking his turn with Meghan when hubby thinks the gang bang is all done is respectful - NOT! The crack about how"a real cock would feel in my ass." is not humiliating - RIIIIIGHT!

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Some amount of words spent to convince us that hubby and wife love each other but nothing in the prose really proves it to me. Can't say I understand such a lifestyle but to each his own. I believe the author has made an attempt to describe the hubby's emotions and motivations but doesn't quite get there. Hubby ignoring the diary indicates he doesn't care that much. Wife not encouraging her hubby to check out the diary doesn't indicate a whole lot of commitment on her part either. Wife not being able to verbalize well is no excuse for not making sure hubby is involved.

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Overall, well written, lifestyle depicted just not my cup of tea.

AnonymousAnonymous8 months ago

Great story- very erotic writing almost all the way through. Not enamored of the lifestyle but hotwife_hubby hits all the buttons! Solid *****

AnonymousAnonymousalmost 4 years ago
Yeah,There MIght Be a Husband That Stupid

Another unbelievable story featuring a dumb,Fuck of a Cuck husband and his POS wife. Why are they even married? A 1 rating for this steaming pile of literary crap.

AnonymousAnonymousover 5 years ago

The reason most, I'd say 90%, of the women in this lifestyle could not support themselves alone as well as the husband can. He pays for her living it up and ends up like this guy sitting in a chair in the hall. That is IF he's allowed in the house at all. The very moment I heard her say that her pussy was now his I would have opened the door, next opened a window and deposited everything in that room that was hers in the yard. He wants to own her pussy? Fine, he can feed the rest of her too.

I"m not just blowing steam here as I lived this lifestyle to some extent with two different women. The first broke the boundaries, not to the level this one did, and found herself divorced. My current wife enjoyed it for years and one day it ended.

It's not for everyone. Hell, if it was it would be Caligula everywhere. For those that can make it work for them, I applaud them. It's a tightrope.

AnonymousAnonymousabout 7 years ago
No humiliation?

No humiliation he says, the whole thing was humiliating. Some special weekend if she is gone the whole time. I'd like to read one time where the poor sap finally realizes what a fool he has been & puts his foot down. Let the chips fall where they may, split or stay together, things have to change at that point. I did enjoy the tale.

AnonymousAnonymousabout 7 years ago

As a story it was good but man how could anyone live with themselves being the husband. I know this is a story but people do this in real life also. I know many people who swing , a ton that cheat and even one or two that like to watch their girl fuck someone else. The closest to this story is a friend who was married that watched his wife , video her with others and gone to swinger clubs which I thought was very twisted. What is different was he would fuck as many girls as he could also. They divorced he said she cheated which I couldn't understand but she just fell for a guy she was ducking in their lifestyle. I just feel if a guy wants variety don't get married and fuck whoever you want and if a girl wants to do that also she can but society will look at her as a pig. It's just the way it is and I can't imagine what guy would want to be married to that when he could be just one of her fuck buddies. One of the couples I knew that were swinging were both cheating on the side and it came out . The wife wanted to be able to do it but not her husband just like this story kinda. He did for a while but when she went for a three day weekend he did also but left a day later so when he came home on Tuesday the wife was pissed. He told her he would continue to do as she did and took part responsibleity for starting their lifestyle but was not going to be a wimp and sit around while she did what she wanted. Over the next year she was always mad at him but they continued fucking others . He slowly saw the end and started taking money out of his pension at work and large home equity on their house. The next weekend she went away which started to be 5-6 times that year he moved out and had her served when she returned. He said she could keep the house if she could afford it or sell and split the profit which was next to nothing. She went after his pension but they had to add both up and split which hers was more so she lost there also. Her lawyer was digging but he checked it a casino saying he was gambling his sorrows away while his wife vacationed fucking different men , she was totally embarrassed in court that day. She was devastated when it was all over never seeing it coming and was left truly alone because the guys were using her for fun , one of there fuck buddies. This is s real story and mostly how this style would end most marriages.

AnonymousAnonymousabout 7 years ago
Very good story!

Nicely developed and erotic throughout. FYI, most of the negative anon comments are from one person. Use the delete key to take out all the trash. 4*s.

cyferxcyferxabout 7 years ago
The good, the bad, and the ugly

The Good

The story is well conceived. You have present action, and flashbacks that take us through the back story. You also give yourself space to develop the story that it doesn't seem rushed.

The Bad

The sex goes on a bit overlong. It is hard to believe that other than a seasoned whore she could take that much sex, she is essentially fucked twice by four guys, all in the ass, and then goes for another super sex session with a 9" dick in her pussy. This is not to mention seriously sucking them all off, all of these big dicks. This makes it seem like a fantasy stroke story rather than a serious piece about the nature of cuckolding and how one finds one going deeper and deeper down the rabbit hole. There is also the question of cuckolding. The protagonist goes on how he is not a cuckold because he isn't into humiliation. But there is a range in cuckolding, from simply having the wife knowingly cheat to being in panties. You then take the guy all the way to being denied his wife's pussy. That is cucking my friend. You can't go much farther without explicit humiliation from the wife. Her lovers humiliate him verbally twice, so you are definitely in the humiliation, and his dick tweaks when she bosses him, so femdom is there as well. Why are you denying it?

The Ugly

You badly need an editor. There are serious and numerous grammar problems with this piece that detract from reading it. There are also many malapropisms, such as feint for faint and so on.

I would be interested in seeing this story continue because the guy doesn't seem to realize the little cuck shit he is. We have the dramatic irony of knowing that he is well and truly cucked despite his denials since he goes from filming his wife have sex with other men (which is still cucking), to listening through a door, and then she leaves him out completely by having her affairs outside the house, so much so that he often doesn't see her during the week, and he isn't having much sex with her. She is even going on week long vacations with her lovers, and now his wife has given her pussy to another man and is going away for the weekend without even mentioning it to him or giving a damn about what he is going to do during that time. Femdom again. (You also conveniently forget about the kid they have. Where is it? Boy or girl?) Roommates have more concern for each other than she has for him. Is he in cuck heaven or cuck hell?

So, I think it would be interesting to see where this goes. Does he become aware that he essentially has no relationship with his wife, certainly no romantic or even sexual relations with her? I hope you continue and make this a complex story and not some "complete cuckold" fetish story, which is where it is right now, frankly. You do add complexity by having them discuss what he gets out of all this, but now all that is out the window. What does he get out of it now? The inversion of what a husband should be getting and what he is getting? He is almost getting nothing at this point, not even her common concern, let alone actual attention. Their agreement is now problematized because instead of including him, having fantastic sex, she is now explicitly excluding him, from her pussy, from her presence (she only has shown up as a special birthday treat) and the best he can hope for has been reduced to getting a blow job, and that might just be because it was his birthday. And what a birthday! No candle, no cake, and really no wife! He asks himself how is he a husband if he can't fuck her in her pussy? Word, my friend. Wake up! (Is her ass still available to him like her other lovers whom she is also excluding?)

I hope you make this a journey of awakening for him. How far down the rabbit hole he is and thinking about how he can get back, if he can get back from this. Don't leave this as a story making him a "total cuckold" in complete denial. This can be much more than a mere fetish piece and you have the talent to make it more. I hope you do. (Just make sure to get an editor.)

AnonymousAnonymousabout 7 years ago
5 Great read

Anony is a retarded brained fag

AnonymousAnonymousabout 7 years ago
What were you thinking? That this is fun and sexy? That's no marriage, except on paper....

...it's a morose joke. Far too long for what it offers, and far too little of interest to any but the cucky crowd, it is a complete waste of ones and zeros.

'Course your moniker should warn any non-cucky-boiz that this is not the story for them.

You have a right to express yourself. You do it well, except for your tendency to go on and on and on and on and on....but your technicals are pretty good.....your material, story development and character development, however, are in need of serious revamping.

Rockyderek_caRockyderek_caabout 7 years ago
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Why writing on drugs is bad. These characters are awful people.

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