- Incest/Taboo
- Tami Ch. 02
- Page 7
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Click here"So, she wont mind, you know, us being together?"
"No, not really. She said that if that's what we like, then who's she to criticize."
"Really?"
"Yeah, she doesn't care about it. She's had her suspicions the last few days, so I admitted it. I even told her about Thomas last night."
"Did you tell her everything?"
"Yeah, everything."
"Well, this should be an interesting evening."
"Do you think we can come over with you two when you lock up tonight?"
"Yeah, I think that would be fine."
- COMMENTS
Anonymousover 10 years agoThe author wrote it this way because he's 22 years old and knows fuck-all about sex, relationships and mature commitment except what he sees on internet porn; his writing has 'serially-rejected loner' stamped all over it, so treat his stories as the unrealistic tripe they are, because he really, truly has no clue what he's talking about
Anonymousover 10 years agoOk, I'm really enjoying the story, for the most part, so far. ...but as another poster commented "What the fuck is up with this Beta brother?!" I agree. No brother I know would have let this newbie tard see more of his sister then having him help pull her out of the hot tub. Sure as fuck wouldn't have let him be drying her off and all of that. ANY brother would have happily showered and dried his sister and got her dressed himself if she was hurt or trashed. No question at all. And he kept letting the sister and guy feed themselves more beer and gave the dude more as well while all this is going on? Not! ...and as soon as the dude suggested we should 'help her take those clothes off' he would have been been sporting a black eye and shoved out the front door. ...left a drunk dude in the bedroom with his trashed sister? (even if he was watching) NOT!
Either the author has never had a sister / close female cousin or the author is being intentionally antagonistic ;) For the most part the rest of the story is pretty good, a few places where the same question/answer were repeated a bit too much, and the promotion could have been spread out over a few months before the sister shows up. Otherwise a really good plot line. I almost stopped reading when the brother was being totally Beta but.... I'll keep reading since it seems to be leveling out! Hoping for a good ending! :)
trikieover 10 years agogod I thought they were going to spit roast that girl! but that was magic!
Anonymousalmost 11 years agoSo, not only is Tami sleeping with her brother Jason, but he is also giving their mother a massage? Wow! That is hot, and a lot of love in the family.
And then there is Thomas, Jason's new friend, new assistant gym manager, and who also has been intimate with his own sister. Lots more love in the family going on.
And, all the action, while still improbable, continues to be so well-described and written, it proves the adage about "a willing suspension of disbelief." Good work, TomWine, really well done,
