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Awesome awesome story line i hope u keep it coming for many more insyalments. It is enjoyed n appreciated.

Very hot! Not crazy about the domination stuff but the rest was fun. Five stars and a favorite point!

10 Big Blazing Stars for CWG. I agree with 26thNC "throw the whore into a volcano!" with her lover PUKO at the same time. If I was the MC here, It couldn't turn out this good for me. Cuz I would have found another path to that Mountain Cabin love nest. If it was any way possible....

CWG is cooking with gas again! Great Drama, intense story. 10 big blazing stars. Buster2U

GREAT story !

Five stars, without a doubt... well-written with enough touches of snark so you know it's an imhapless tale.

Very nicely done.

Great finish

Enjoyed this final chapter. The twists and character interactions were great, the sex too. Liked the callback with the demon in particular. Thx for the tale.

Thank you for a fun, sexy, sweet, sad, well written story!!

Thanks for another great story! There is plenty of room for more. I hope you pick this up again.

10 Big Blazing Stars for another Great Epic tale! Heartbreak to heartbreak with this meeting of cultures. Yet the truth eventually comes out and turns out it is all about seduction and power for PUKO, the slimeball. How he didn't loose his dick or at least his balls remains a mystery....

Poor kid will have Devon as his dad. Ava is a fool if she thinks he will be faithful after marriage.

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Hey Aspern, Yeah, this was actually the first thing I ever wrote. VERY flattered that you're enjoying it.

Thank you so much for the comment. That means a lot. :)

Wow! LOVED this... the girls (they seem like they'd be more fun than a barrel full of monkeys..., the dialogue...seems Jakes going to have some fun...

And great there's a Ch 02

Easy 5 and fave

Brutus is the new anti hero, love his whole attitude. Hope there's more chapters to Cum. Five stars!

Wow didn’t see that ending! Great story 5*

Damn! His wife and her friend really redefined nastiness in the worst possible way.

Both were clearly narcissists.

The wife clearly misunderstood how her husband genuinely loved her, his acquiescence to her was from love not submission.

I was curious regarding his business, I somehow...

As a story it is well crafted and very entertaining. If it were real life then it would be a despicable thing to do to a baby

CupidCupid: Thanks.

Hornchurch: Apologies.

PS. You are right about Romford. 😉

Yes!!!! Please see how far she can push it! I can't wait.

Different... a little odd, bit not objectionable. I just wonder why she was so opposed to the clinical procedure - which really wasn't explained - but I learned a long time ago not to question women about certain things !

Loved the story and was surprised with the twisty ending! 5 stars. Awesome, as always!

Still, Stephen now has a baby son and it makes me wonder: is he really leaving him to the asshole Devon and revenge-cheater Ava to raise? I'm chalking up Steven's decision here to being consumed...

I liked it a lot. I just could have used some more sex scenes lol

Perhaps the best piece you’ve given us on this site, and that comes with accolades for “Sugar” and “Sailing to the Bottom”, and of course The Witches! Thank you.

Thank you so much Paul. I am glad you see the dynamics so clearly, and as you say, the next part will be critical xxxx

Well written and well played. 5.0*

Hopefully there will be another chapter

A really delightful story. Thank you! 5*

The last sentence killed the story Went from a 5 to a 2

Skillfully crafted!

The power dynamics are palpable and arousing.

The sex play is lusty.

The characters are relatable.

I am enjoying this, especially since Piper must now reconcile her untouchable aching wet pussy with her uncertainty about her true desires and needs!

Mmmm I want daddy to fuck me too……JJ tots and a leaky horny cunt begging to be filled repeatedly……thx for sharing x

Martian Slut Ray sure worked on this wife. I didn’t see the revenge twist coming - that was poetic. IRL if ex wife is as attractive as portrayed, she’ll find another chump. Good story!

Fucking hot!!!!! 5⭐️s!!!

I've read them all now, and I think this story is the best of the lot. Your writing is superb. Thanks!

I generally like RG’s stories, but this one is an exception. Why would any self respecting guy put up with her slutty behaviour for so long? He had nothing to lose by getting rid of the bitch so much sooner. Second problem is that he starts an affair of his own before getting quit...

Good story!! I liked the slow pace of this story. Jules has now opened Pandora's and a black cock will fill it hopefully with a black baby.