Erotic Couplings Story Comments

Not the first one of yours I liked a lot...

what a fun-loving bunch...!

must say the ending was a surprise

Nice work Jayne. Great storytelling and what a fun ending! I wasn't expecting that!

Outstanding! Nothing better than tongue fucking my wife and the bonus is the erotic cleanup ritual which often leads to round two.

The more the merrier!!!!!

Another hot masterpiece, Nikkiejanes. How your described the three-way session between you, Simon and Cheryl was fantastic and the sex seemed so natural and comfortable between each of you. Full marks from me (again)

Saw that coming, if you will. Hard to imagine you were “flying blind”. So impressive how you sustain the erotic tension/feeling throughout a lengthy sex scene filled with reflection and detail. Aside: Given Jay’s healthy libido maybe Kevin continues as a FWB. Look forward to seeing...

Definitely had more fun with Adam Cross. The copy/pasted passages were boring of course. And the male gaze in the whole story makes me wonder what good it is to write as a couple. Lady, slap him across the face and have him snap out of it! This one was a bummer as much as Adam Cross...

Awesome story very well done

Wish you could, would give us more. I appreciate your desire to tell a story, not just a bunch of gratuitous sex(mind the sex was very imaginative and well written). And to be clear, I don't just mean Hero and the ladies, I give 5 stars to all of it.

Did anyone else find it very disturbing that neither one of them said a single kind or loving word to each other???? and he has balls, he was a bigger DOUCHEBAG

So I've gone backwards reading the newest to the oldest as I'm catching up on a lot of your stories. Believe this is the first one? I've enjoyed them all and these pi stories are funny. So glad I've come across your awesome work. Thank you

This is an incredibly hot story. I can't wait to read more. Thank you!

Still patiently waiting for the next chapter 😁😁😁

I absolutely loved this story! I desire to lick my cum from my wife, but she does not let do it very often and she doesn’t care for it.

A very exciting and excellent story

The twist is very well done!

I enjoy stories like this one, where the details of place and circumstance come off so authentic they feel almost autobiographical. I thought your descriptions of sex from the first-person-male perspective were very interesting to read. Your characters communicate well with each...

Really looking forward to the next one. Great scenario you built here. Love the focus on Stacy's huge assets.

Very much like the refreshing perspective, although still objecting to the denouncing of 'sluts' in the former chapter. I am, as i think all men should be, a feminist by principle. Most men are much sluttier than most women, yet they're seldom denounced as sluts. I'm protesting that...

"And did you think, too bad they are scared?'

Yeah, scared breasts scare me.

Fantastic writing both in pace and description. This easily one of the best stories I've read here. I hope you continue to write.

Great series, have the wife sharing his side sluts!

Please fix your grammatical mistakes.

So, so many. "He" when you mean "her" several times. Repeated words. Misspellings.

Stuff like that takes the reader out of the story so fast.

Fix tho5and thisnis an A+

Kind of a sad story

Beautifully described, detailed and evolving storyline. And sexy as all get out!

xox

Another winner! I respect how the author makes each story unique. Especially liked Mel’s personality— capable of being serious and playful.

I usually don't read stories over 5 pages - but that is good and, as others have said, worth a sequel.

Hi anonymous. The full story has nearly 20,000 words and as this is 1st person perspective and I'm an amateur writer, I use 'i' and 'my' about 150 times. I also use commas far too liberally. While constructive criticism is appreciated yours come across as rude, I think your comment...

Good story! Can't wait to see Sarah jumping on his cock

Where's the wife for a full day on his birthday? He professes that he now belongs to a prostitute. Who is this "friend" the wife is gone for a full day with? What a shit show of a story.

So far all of the stories of yours that I have read have the same basic underlying theme. And we get no background on the characters.

Beautiful story, just what I was looking for. I'm young and eager dude in a community of older people and for the first time I'm noticing the new dimension of senior sexuality, something that I never thought existed to the extent I've learned about. I'm making older friends and your...

Reading some of the comments here, some folks are relating too much to reality. I don't often enjoy long protracted stories. This one intrigues me though because it is well written which keeps my attention. In other words, I'm enjoying the tale for the fantasy and not just the sex....

If she feels that way about him why did she even get married to him or based on her character so far why does he get married at all?

I hadn't finished again another example of man v machine and the wrong contender succeeding . Now where was i, quite put me off my stroke, very unsettling and not even a bed offered for the night a little churlish my friend but at least a taxi was on hand to return her to the arms...