Incest/Taboo Story Comments

Wow! LOVED this... the girls (they seem like they'd be more fun than a barrel full of monkeys..., the dialogue...seems Jakes going to have some fun...

And great there's a Ch 02

Easy 5 and fave

I liked it a lot. I just could have used some more sex scenes lol

Hopefully there will be another chapter

Mmmm I want daddy to fuck me too……JJ tots and a leaky horny cunt begging to be filled repeatedly……thx for sharing x

very good

Loved the story but thought it could've used a little more reluctance to being sub on Marcus' part.

That’s was so so fkn hot and erotic loved it! I’m a 16JJ so I love getting my big tits sucked on. Bitten pinched mmmm I need daddy too or mummy either or both haha thx for sharing x

Thank you for a wonderful series that hits so many right notes. Imagining the mother calling unannounced one day and being lured into the sexy household. Well done

Wow! This story has it all. Great work!

I have no understanding of why authors release stories that constantly hint at intercourse without getting to that part. Such a tease!

Twincest is the best. When they were discussing the positions, I genuinely thought a suggestion would come from the background by their mom.

5 ⭐

Loved it, so bloody sexy, he should get all of them pregnant. Lucky man.

"27 Hours (Hopefully: Ch. 01):" Nineteen Year Old Virile Cousin, Chris Williams and Twenty-two Year Old Sex-addicted College Senior Cousin and Susan's Sister, Marie and Twenty-seven Year Old Master's Student and Marie's Sister, Susan.

Before my wife and I married--during our two...

Please continue!

Amazing story... ⭐⭐⭐⭐⭐

Oh and it seems the parents know and approve.

LOL! The bra size? They what some of the commenters focused on? Are you kidding me?

5 star! HOT STORY. Great build up! ( for me and the dad.). Delete those negative comments.

Would love to read more about Shianne and her controlling all her brothers

Masterful??!! Fulfilling??!! Gut-wrenching??!! How many ways to describe what I have just read are there??!!

I want to cry at the emotional miasma that is Dana, and her relationship with James (primarily), and then with the rest of the family/world!! She is NOT damaged...she...

Enjoyed the story. Can't wait for more stories from you

still a 5, but the rough stuff in #3 was a turn off.

I look forward to your next stories.

You have a gift. Thank you fr sharing.

For writing a beautiful story of an Indian culture from an American tribe of people who need to be recognized as the true American thank you again for writing

Good story though I didn't care much for him making his mother 'flash' around. That's not love, it's selfishly making her do things for his own enjoyment, and doesn't matter whether she feels humiliated by that or not. Of course finally having his children is the natural consequence...

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Other than typos and wrong name references...ash rather than mel, very erotic and fun to read. Lovely fantasy.

Definitely more about her actual pregnancy…she’ll need some new bras (mostly black of course..)….she might have days where she feels moody, bitchy even…shopping therapy might help with that, lots of expensive strappy heels and sandals..she’s going to need lots of things for their...

6stars

Unbelievably erotic!

What's her motivation? Does she have some kind of daddy fetish? Is she just a cheating slut? Is she getting some kind of revenge on her husband? Some of us need that kind of information to really get into a story like that. Otherwise it just feels kind of empty.

Next chapter??

Hot story! A little unnecessary ending. But maybe you can write next chapter/epilogue taking place 18 years later and involving Giselle?

Of course the thong was black…she knows exactly what she’s doing to daddy…daddy’s in big trouble already isn’t he?…Night night daddy….so hot…

MK

Want to read more of your work!! Please continue

that becky name instead of rachel seems maybe a copy or reproduction of a similar story and bad editing skills

Oh Wow! I could not stop reading, seeing in my head what was going on. It was almost as if I was living his part, hearing his thoughts, seeing their bodies and feeling their emotions. And then I felt the intensity of their love and sex.

Thank God no part 2 hopefully it won't come