Mature & Age Difference Story Comments

Fantastic setup for more developments. Also with other mature ladies in the Golfclub. I

Like the idea of cougars on massagetables and erotic encounter of milf. Lacking sex adventure at home. Here spiced up with a lot of young female either from family of the older ladies or from...

GIANT TITS

FOOT LONG COCK

DOMINANT TEENAGER

FUCKED ALL TOWN’S ATHLETES

TYPICAL IMMATURE CHILDISH FANTASY

One of the best stories I have read in years.

Your writing is stellar.

If there are other installments they will keep any reader rapt with attention.

Thanks for making the morning read a positive experience.

I liked the detail in the story which made me think that this was, at least in part, autobiographical. Is that true?

The characters are diverse and well drawn as they engage in increasingly naughty erotic adventures. A very satisfying read.

Such highly educated people would say "things", not "stuff". You use "stuff" way too much. Else, i have no complaints.

Nothing makes my pussy more wet except the thought of having an old man in me.. they are awesome

Such a wonderful love story!!!!!!!!!!

One word !!!!!! Beautiful!!

Loved it. A great romance story that's more about the relationship journey instead of focusing on the destination. True love. And no sharing nonsense or anything like that. Truly something to be envied.

Very hard to read. I think you could do with more context and clear focus. You mention a bunch of random names and events without a clear timeline. It's very hard to follow what happens.

this is so hot, please make more like this.

You are a good writer. Being retired military myself, I like the story line and your descriptions. I can identify with all aspects of this real-life drama, and clearly you can too. Your chapter lengths are good--please continue. It makes it easy to read a chapter in one sitting. One...

any chance of new part ?

I can certainly see follow ups. Mom falls. Then Kendea's bitchy daughter (maybe acted a bitch because she secretly had a crush on him, but dating a geek would lower her status in the high school heirarxh).

Great input, thanks. I have a new version titled Mom Watch which is variation on this story that does include some of your ideas. Hopefully it will be published soon.

I’m certain I’m not alone in having hoped Sara would have been more of a participant than a voyeur, but - hell - this is your story. If we want a threesome we should write it.

Your epilogue, though, gave us hope for more!

I admire your prose: sensually descriptive without being...

Excellent, Hot, Hot, Hot!

Sounds like a plan to me, where were the GTO's when I was graduating from high school or college? A well thought out and written story. I look forward to reading the next chapter. I appreciate your and your Muse's imagination and abilities to bring it to your story. Thank you for...

should there be a woman around on the Front Range of Colorado who is intrigued by the story, I'd be interested in discussing it with you.

Those at a distance? I'm up for correspondance with you, too.

Diese Geschichte ist der absolute Wahnsinn ich hoffe es gibt noch mehrere geile Fortsetzungen dieser Serie. Geil wäre wenn Albert und Sarah irgendwann Alex zu kucken lassen und er vielleicht nach dem ficken beide sauber lecken darf.

Very hot, one of my fantasies I had a very sexy health class teacher in highschool

Well structured. Very convincing.

Excellent, almost perfect, maybe the best story on this entire board.

Drama, character: defined by actions, words, dynamics, growth, and potential

Plot, romance, eroticism, hope for the future

Two damaged people finding and helping each other, and starting to bond

If there are any...

More, Please.

Very nice when you making part 4. Always liked reading stories like this.

Bravo!

Very, very good story!!!!!!!!

Loved it. Perfect way to end it. Although... I would love to read a third chapter. And I know it's not for everyone, but it just feels like such a shame to leave the daughter's love go unrequited. It's clear her father has similar feelings for her, too, and Zara seems to be all for...

Need one more story at least

A sad ending, not the one I was hoping for... but wait. A chapter 2 I see. Dare I hope!? I just hope it's not one of those "5 years later" things, she'd been fucked by a bunch of other guys, he's screwed random women, and in the end they end up together and basically they've wasted...

Marry that wonderful woman RIGHT FUCKING NOW Nick you moron! And cherish her until her dying breath. It's rare that anyone finds real true love and it seems these two have. So screw everything else and just enjoy the rare incredible gift. If children is an issue, adoption hello? The...

Definitely one more in this!

Well, my humble opinions about some elements that James put in the comments:

1) Voyeurism and the landscapers - There will be opportunities for them to admire Lisa some more. With Lisa still living in the house…

Well, like I said in another’s chapters, I see these guys like us, the...

The last paragraph says it all "We're not as good as we once was, but we are as good once as we ever was". RIP Toby Keith.

Good story. English second language?