Romance Story Comments

Lovely storey, thank you for your writing. ⭐️⭐️⭐️⭐️⭐️

Great, enjoyable story!! I will have to check out your other works.

Loved this collaboration. Delightful writing, with the meta-element of "how to write a romance."

Given the name of the collaboration, I'm hoping you will feel inspired to go to sea or at least on a boat -- perhaps sending up one of the classics, or one of the "top 15 beach romance...

You are an excellent storyteller. Bravo.

The characters you created are rich and human, full of emotion. The story line flowed well and steady, not too fast or dragging.

I'm so glad I found this story and will be reading more.

I like the story but agree it sometimes gets bogged down in minutia. It would be interesting to read a story like this where humans have to flee the planet and in order to do so they develop ships that are also their habitats for their new home, being self-contained with the bridge...

Guess I’m just an old romantic fool; As I read it my interest went from “ hmm-hawww” to “well-well-well” then “yeah!!”.

Wow…I had tears for the last few pages. Absolutely terrific story.

Thank you for a fun, sexy, sweet, sad, well written story!!

Thanks for another great story! There is plenty of room for more. I hope you pick this up again.

Hoary Cleric - thanks for the comment! Honestly, I don't go for the casual sex immediately thing, either. It strains credibility and feels... forced. It's difficult to write some of these stories and build intimacy naturally and still have a surprise ending. Maybe I should have...

Nooooo! What's Dougie waiting for? Why didn't he talk to his dad?! What the heck? I'm so invested - it's like General Hospital (GenXers get it)! Hurry up and post the next part, please?!?! Lol

Great job, CLM! Keep up the good work.

Sc8

The man leads a charmed life but not much conflict. Perhaps for the Rest of the Story.

More please.

How is this romance ???? If she seduces a girl and then has sex with him ????? And then it just ends 2⭐️ for that reason

I keep reading this one and I always love it

As a husband whose wife now resides in a memory hospital, your story resonates in a way that only those who have been there, or are still going there can understand. I'm three years into the journey and have no way to know when it ends. You captured the highs and lows very well,...

Wonderful tale with only one flaw. If Grant went to prison for attacking Peter, why didn’t Officer Cooper make that connection after his assault on Anna? Loved the story, that detail is bothering me

I love this series. Make her use the bathroom again when he is present This is my fetish. But seriously, this is series is so awesome. Looking forward for more parts to this story. Thanks for writing it.

I really hope you finish this story. I just reread the whole thing, again, and loved it as much as before. I enjoy other work from you but I hope you come back to this story soon.

She cares about animals but likes the circus? Not buying that in her character, even if she does have a “traditional/older style” background.

Great and sensible story but it need an editor counsel and perhaps you need,improve your writing skills.

Thanks for your rale,and insights.

Dang John, I almost broke out the tissue while Brian interacted with the children. Beautiful story! Dang what a story and can hardly wait for part 2, thank you! 5 ⭐⭐⭐⭐⭐'s.

You are a wonderful writer, thank you for the gifts of your stories.

Page 1, who is Sam?

It was well written. What little dialogue there was flowed nicely. I like the part about the apology for calling her a bitch. I feel it was to short. The backstory seemed about right in length and detail, but the romance seemed rushed. Would have benefited with more interaction including...

What a wonderfully unexpected story!! 5 stars

I will say that the description resulting in Gary's dawning realization that his wife was not human seemed to come almost out of nowhere. The "meat" underlying the logic was pretty thin.

That conversation they had, after he'd met Fred... that was some real art. Really great story, subtle and deep. Those two felt like real people, and just as complicated.

Outstanding treatment of an age old plot device. 5 stars

The story seems to be bogging down. Where's the conflict? Where's the excitement. It seems that now we are to have a triogamous coupling with full parental approval. The boss knows the situation and is down with it, and the PI work is nothing more than mundane tailing of cheating...

Just a great story, the author should be proud of their work.

Extremely well deserved 5 star

I really like your writing, and judging it as a love story I gave it the appropriate 5 stars. After all it's just a story, made to make us feel good and it accomplished that easily. Well done

Good story. Chapter one set the stage followed faithfully through.

Very cool that you wrote again. Brian DuMont seems to be a mix of two villains: Philippe Du Monte (classic literary villain that the author original never punished and others had to do so); and Lord Voldemort, who didn't like being named after someone else.

And the idea of ​​the character...

I loved it. Very cute ending.