Loving Wives Story Comments

Once drugs came into play and blackmail. Different ball game

It is Rape. Up till I’ll that time I BTB. Her. But then I would go after him.

Second thoughts. I liked the epilogue much better after I read it again. All in all and excellent story.

The ending makes this a more authentic cuckold tale than most, for he left his offspring to be raised unknowingly (for him) by another. Just like the cuckoo bird inspiration for the term.

Found a reason

To

Murder 3 people, not a good guy. Also another rich cunt using

His money to abuse the world. Wish the wife made her plan work

Short'n'Sweet, to the point, concise but well-written no frills BTB cheating wife story. 4.5 stars..

R.S.

Aw Reg, this tale is just slop served up for the BTB guys. The only thing I got out of it is the info on pet grooming.

Very good story, except for the epilogue, which I thought was not a very satisfactory ending at all. Past events were described in a scattershot way and seemingly random order, with no real point. The clear picture I got from the story was that there were no winners. I sometimes wonder...

Another JPB story. Starts good and is interesting and well written. Then you come to an unacceptable open ending. What could have been a 4 or 5 star rating ends up a 3.

Well done.

Very good, our very pragmatic MC is to be admired (our author too of course) for his calm facade in plan how to protect himself. He really didn't have much of a choice in the matter, you know I'm sure the 'do unto others before they do unto you' definitely applies to our MC's situation....

Terrific story of a hot MILF cheating on her husband of 23 years with absolutely no regrets. The very stupid cock-craving slut got off easy with a straightforward divorce, but she also has a “DEV” tattoo above her pussy for any future lover to see until she gets it painfully removed....

That was a tough one. I can see how the monster was living in him and the violence that it brought on, but it was hard. However, you pushed through and brought them to a better place. I don't tend toward reconciliation, but it seems right here. Thanks for writing.

Thanks for a delightfully charming love story, well-written and an excellent read!! Good job!!!!

The wisdom is to write about what you know. Unfortunately, it's clear that you don't know much about working as a classical musician - you've made a ton of mistakes on the topic. Her professional downfall is especially at odds with the real world, given what's currently going on with...

The point of this story is that he knew from the start that his relationship with his ex was doomed, but let it down slowly so that she could adjust, and then finally bailed out, which is good because the ex is a nutbag.

Good one!

Good read, but 10 years later Devon the prick needs to learn the kid's real father. Ignorance of the fact is not revenge.

Yup, like the comment below from @majorreader24, a post-nup would have gone a long way in cementing their particular arrangement.

Notwithstanding, having read another similar story here on LIT where the wife and her lesbian lover were attempting to cajole the husband into providing...

Agree with Walkdeufe61, very good dialouge!

Beautiful story.

First of all, on a scale of LW writing, this and all CWG's works are in top .01%. I think in his other life, people pay money for his work.

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Having said that, I wonder why so many readers parse the characters in a story looking for inconsistencies, flaws, and incongruence. Unless...

Great revenge

I don't think I would view it as a positive thing, knowing that a child bearing my DNA was going to grow up having a pair of cheaters as parents and role models (because Ava thought cheating was a suitable revenge for cheating), and will in all likelihood grow up to be someone who...

So you are going to end up dressed up like a girl, with a big black cock in your mouth and one up your ass. I hope at least your wife is sucking your cock off before she lets you Watch her get gangbang. I don’t understand how you wanting her to get fucked with bigger cocks turns...

I loved it. Great twist at the end. 5 big stars.

Why did the MC stay instead of leaving his wife while she was up stairs cheating, who would fucking stay? He had a car any normal person would have took off that for me where the story fell down.⭐️⭐️⭐️⭐️

The dialog and lack of focus (jumped from first to third person and jumped perspective) made this almost unreadable.

Awesome story, great characters, an interesting play on infidelity, and what people can fall prey to when they are deeply committed to their partners. The cliché: Love is blind is never more true.

He should have gotten a post nup signed before the reconciliation.

10 Big Blazing Stars for NC, one of the best writers on Lit. It seems strange to see so many negative comments from readers about such a good writers story. The same kind of comments that I get so often. This Story is so much like me...LOL I could have been the main character in this...

interesting blend of hot cheating wife erotica, incestuous voyeurism, and btb. I enjoyed it.

For a third part, Selma could try to get her husband back, be repentant and admit that the initial coupling was rape and the pregnancy unwanted. Their resolve weakens a little, she's going...

I thought it was realistic except for the fact she talked it out with him. In my experience, most of the older women just find an activity that takes all of their time and then use one of those days to be with their lovers. Most of what they do is not sex but the girlfriend/boyfriend...

good start... interesting story line

That was some bullshit. Never write again you sorry bastard. You left me..your audience hanging with a BULLSHIT ending to this story. If I can figure out how, I will never read any more of your works......I apologize. Your writing is ok, BUT, I will read your future writings as...

Serious payback! Great story. ⭐️⭐️⭐️⭐️⭐️