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That was beautiful! Nothing like a husband and wife connecting in spite of all life throws at them. Very well done! Thank you for sharing it here.

SUCKED! 1 star. the only redeeming factor is the guy is dead. Like you didn't know. The M/C was a waste, and the bitch made Linda look like a saint. Sorry. A waste of time. Better luck next time, will. I going to Vegas. The odds of her cheating again are through the roof.

The BEAR

The originality of your writing talent is nothing short of impressive. This story is original, humorous, and HOTTTTT even if LW is a hard Genre to crack.

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6****** Hooyah, Salutes.... and I'm a stingy rater.

These guys are great! Part 2 please!!!!

@ccitydude - thanks again 😊 Emily

@ccitydude - thank you 😊 Emily

Awww... It turns out it was a love story. Or a love boat story. Crap. Now I have that theme song in my head.

115 chapters and I'm still mad I have to wait to read the next one, so you're obviously doing it right. Great work.

I'll get specific, I think Gwen is a carpet muncher. Like leans more lesbian then Bi. Although it sounds like the shot will help at least. But I think she'll be bothering Evelyn and the other girls alot. I'd be ok, he'll have the other 2 girls anyway. I love the story alot though.

Wow this storey is just getting better and better! ⭐️⭐️⭐️⭐️⭐️

10 big Blazing stars. It is funny how you can be married to someone for 26 years and NOT know that they are the biggest whore in the world, like this poor guy's wife. Just pure low life cheating slut. She deserves to burn in hell. But this is just a story, not a docu-drama. LOL excellent...

I really enjoyed this one, but you kinda left us hanging. You can’t mention a three-way with Julie and not deliver. That’d be so hot!!!!

Alas, at the end of this installment, I feel somewhat inadequate in that all I can offer a five star review and many thanks.

The answer remains more rocks.

What a great story. Both chapters. Your words paint some very erotic, arousing pictures. Thank you for sharing.

This was so hot. Loved it. I wish more authors wrote like this

⭐⭐⭐⭐⭐ The Piper demanded all accounts be settled in full.

10 Big Blazing Stars. I just can not see myself as the main character in so many of these stories. Had I been walking around a party and found MY Wife sitting topless on another guys lap it would have been like Hiroshima. I would have exploded on the guy that was my former boss up...

It was a well crafted storie, the drama and angst that Rob has to endure was a painfull remainder that for most of his life, he has been abandoned or betrayed by those that supposedly should love and support him.

The fact that you avoid most of the cliches in the end, is also a good...

Really good!

Having lost a friend to ALS, this story echoes very strongly with me. You tugged on all the strings as you went through ... except one. https://www.als.org/ ALS is a progressive neurodegenerative disease and we need your help to find a cure.

Thank You for your service and this story. What a tribute you have given to those gave their lives for our freedom. Only someone who has served in a war zone would know some of the feelings you expressed in the story. They don’t talk much about what happened during their time in service....

Incredibly stupid "husband " character! The INSTANT he was free, why didn't he immediately go to the hospital, and from there call the police?????

Well-written! But the readers were left hanging with no climax-- i.e., resolution.

Jesus, I think you made your series twice as big by adding Glossary over and over again. Nothing for nothing, never have lived in Hawaii, but I've figure out unique words by reading around the words themselves. Oh, and if can read stories out of UK, etc. I think I can get by without...

Outstanding!!! Looking forward to seeing more!

Nope...sorry...I am out of this story/series...

I cannot suffer the extensive issues with the writing style...or lack thereof. I AM posting under my name, so no one can claim I am hiding behind the "Anonymous" moniker!!

Too Bad this has come to this...I am not usually quite so...

You have captured the lifestyle of rural northern New Englanders in this and other stories.. I’ve seen many of the scenes you have depicted from the 50’s 60/s and 70’s. In my lifetime. Great memories!!!

Looking forward to the next instalment!

Zach.

I hated this story. The author treats the issue as a difference in cultures. It isn't. If it was just a cultural thing then she'd have explained the culture to her fiance rather than being deliberately dishonest and making vows knowing she was lying. She made western vows she...

4+ I really liked the start of this tale.

Rick could be opening himself up to a butt kicking if ol' Tom decides he doesn't like someone else playing in his sandbox. Story didn't do much for me because of the cheating, even if it was condoned the first time around.

A really good story for a change. 5 solid Stars

How pathetic to read a story and bitch about it ...while spanking your monkey. That said, the ending was a clever diversion, I gave it four stars.

Shitty story about stupid, shitty people.

Mommy dearest

Author, come back to this. I think the quality took a bit of a turn in the second part also, but that doesn't mean it can't get hotter in following parts. And it wasn't bad, it was just a bit of a turn. It's your story to do with as you wish.