First Time Story Comments

good start

That's a nice story. Are all Hong Kong girls as hot as this, because I'm gonna look at them differently now.

Fantastisk, one of the best i've read

An amazing sage. Lots of twists and turns some of which I did not see coming but truly loved the way you kept it exciting. Great story keep them coming

Very good. Continue writing.

Lucie awesome writing and storytelling as always

Nice, sensitive young sexual romance but the past tense kills the energy. Retell it in an active voice and it becomes much more engaging.

Gross, as if she could take a cock that big up her ass without more preparation, unless, like most guys, he's just lying about how big it is.

Nice change of pace. Very refreshing .

I liked the story a lot because it closely follows my own first time experience. The major difference was my concern about the possibility of an unwanted pregnancy...didn't happen but it sure took the edge off of the experience.

So Jezzie as a Former Hardcore Biker, you are writing True stories? or Sex stories? I need to know so I know who the fuck I should be pissed at. I'm old school we never treated woman like that. I found you here a while ago, and thought you were writing "From your own stand point"...

This story is another hot chapter of the mysterious blackmailing series. It’s interesting to see Vanessa’s reappearance and how she brings the story together. I also love how oral your writing is. Well done, Lucie. xo

Great writing, very believable, except for the 9 inch cock part

Yes, please fix that “one leg went up around my waste”… it ruins the mood of the story!

another 5stars IE, yes please bring on the pee play!!!!

(5/3/2024) I read this sweet story three years ago. I don't know why I waited so long to read it again. It's not long at all. But why only one First Time story and only one Romance story? I hope you decide to write more in these genres. Thank you again for sharing your story.

A beautiful story, superbly crafted. If you don't write for a living, you should. Now I have to read all your other stories.

Loved the romance aspect of it. Again, the entire thing was a train wreck. I’m not saying that in a bad way. It was pure chaos, and it had me glued. I’d love to keep reading, but the next series is in the BDSM category, which I don’t do, so I’ll be tapping out here. I’ll just imagine...

I'm looking forward to reading more.

This is great!!

Well written and very erotic. You’ll have to get over the comments from the insecure misogynistic brigade - I’m afraid they’re triggered by a wife who isn’t their possession, despite the husband’s permission and enjoyment. I hope we get to hear about the threesome when they get home.

Another refreshing story that is a flashback fo many people to their youth. Totally enjoyed every work of it. Fantastic job and a pleasant read

Less of a train wreck this time, and I still can’t look away. 5 stars, less begrudgingly this time. I’m not big into the dom and sub thing, but I can see how people would be

Very good, it had the right development and expected ending. She will definetly start having more sex with ben despite having a boyfriend, hope for a part 2 where we can see that.

very hot! Empathetic and rewarded for her care of him. Would enjoy feeling that giant cock and big stretch myself.

It was a good story should have continued 😢

Just like our first time!

So...did he pull it out?

Jack is an asshole. If you love someone, you know you love them…

Killian is an asshole. If you love someone, you know you love them…

Logan is an asshole. You don’t go after your brother’s girl. He even said “I figured you’d be together by now.” You can see when people are secretly...

A sweet, touching, well written story.

Anyone else think we are just never ever going to get another chapter?

I gave you a 5- (4.6 = 92%, ☆☆☆☆☆!)

Very hot..imagining myself being face down and bred by a dominant gay man…a life changed forever..cunted

JT

Definitely a story I'm going to read over and over again.

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