Sci-Fi & Fantasy Story Comments

Sheer brilliance.

This has all the makes of a great story. Looking forward to more.

WOW! What have you crafted Mr Cobalt?

Cock? Another enjoyable romp.

I cannot wait to see what the curse is, good or bad.

Excellent. Tones of QuaranTeam! ,

Great instalment. Don't know much about scifi but enjoying the story

Good start and then Serena.

agreed - very creative and fun! A little twist, and some turns.. very well done!

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Top Shelf Erotique Phantasee!

11/10!!!!!

Very good!

Great finish

Enjoyed this final chapter. The twists and character interactions were great, the sex too. Liked the callback with the demon in particular. Thx for the tale.

Hey Aspern, Yeah, this was actually the first thing I ever wrote. VERY flattered that you're enjoying it.

Thank you so much for the comment. That means a lot. :)

This is so (so!) different from your other stories. Not just the content, but the pace, description, the writing style ... everything! Looking forward to reading more. 5 from me.

@Anon:

You might reread Kevin's thoughts on the matter. He thought there was a chance the guy was someone he could get along with, maybe even befriend. But the energy of the moment made it very risky, after the death match version the previous night's winner created. (FYI, we will...

snorn,

Thank you! I do hope to add to this series at some point.

Just great reading, well done. With the list of characters your white board must be humongous or you write small. Just read where the next chapter is about ready and can't wait, you have me checking each day since January so I won't miss a chapter. Carry on and a big THANK YOU...

Uh so what happened?

Barry, all stories are authors working something out.

It's what makes many children's books so sad.

At least I can kind of get discovering your going down the path of slave owner to make you check yourself.

Out of curiosity, do you have any intention of revisiting this story? If not that’s definitely cool, but if you do, I would love to read more.

Zoey would have driven me crazy. An answer for every possible question, no point talking really.

Do we finally get past some this high school dithering?

Oh god it’s not done I just realized fml. If there’s any way to throw money at the author, please let me know because this should just be a book at this point.

Rawr.

Glad our Mc is getting slightly more comfortable with Beth at least. Still requires suspension of disbelief how bad he is with almost everyone else. Also that no one got Cynthia during the night when it seemed like he was dying, but minor details! Fun stuff anyway.

Let's...

Very clear that Sam is gaining magic power or reserves, and she knows it from the crystals. Makes sense, like a stomach expanding from overeating, except she's eating dragon magic.

Jimdog...1st person present tense is always difficult. There are a lot of gamers who write for this site and voice their stories like they are the DM for a game. 3rd person past tense is what the vast majority of literature is written in for a reason.

That aside, this tale had serious...

Such a great read !

I just finished binge reading this entire series like the novel it is. While it lacks the spicy scenes I usually come to this site for, it’s also a fantastic, enjoyable piece of writing. The characters are so well realized, and it’s just such a fun read! I would like to see this story...

Honestly the idea of having soul mate, played out, is pretty awesome. Even if it's basically a burden here.

Still enjoying!

These three are like 90% imposter syndrome, it's kind of ludicrous lul

Wondering if Beths brief death was actually the soul exchange from their coupling, and not actually the bonding from days before. Meaning there is some more soul to go around, like a certain home for horny monsters.

I enjoying this, but it is true that it only moves closer to the setting of Endangered. Might add well declare it am homage or alternate story in the same world.

Still, happy to keep reading! Nothing wrong with inspiration where you find it.

I was incredibly sad about the blindness, especially as this author is so good at describing emotion. However, this part gets back to the pure joy and love that overcomes the challenges Quin and Rosa face. I have come to adore everything about Rosa so it's still hard to see her struggle...

I'm enjoying this story a lot, the only criticism I would make is that you have a tendency to tell instead of show. Take the first few paragraphs with the healer. We know that her explaining why the deal would be bad for Greg is against her interests. So to write a paragraph that...

Same block of text repeated at the start of the chapter. Horribly written, impossible to know who is who or what is happening.

11 is a number, it’s not a page break. God dammit

Still enjoying this, and while I see why folk might compare to Endangered, this is it's own story. There's nothing new under the sun and yet new stories all the time. Let's celebrate more great stuff to read!