Fan Fiction & Celebrity Story Comments

Hey dude,can you do something with Dua Lipa?

The worst story I've ever attempted to read here on Literotica. Absolutely disgusting, revolting stuff. How anyone could think of writing this filth down is totally beyond me, but apparently not for the American author, who seems to lack any kind of morality whatsoever.

More please. I like where this story is going.

This was good I enjoyed reading this.

I want to read the Rachel Kitty story.

Maya needs more fuck stories. Mouth, tits, pussy and ass would get my creamy spunk.

I'd fuck Melissa into my cock was sore x

The more I see of Laura, the more I want to fuck her. Sexy bitch!

I love jerking off to these little cock teasers. More please.

A truly incredible series. Would ~love~ to see more - really unique premise and so well written. You have a lot of talent, please share it ;) Kudos!

You state this story is fictional, susangreenway, but I'm not convinced! As a lifelong republican (and a proud Welsh woman), I've had to put up with having so-called royals imposed on me for ever. As far as I'm concerned, Wales hasn't had a Prince since Llewelyn the Great! Having...

She dead ass has alien birth control. This chump doesn't realize he's messing with a professional.

@Anonymous - Far from it. Treat this first part as a prologue! Longer chapters coming!

Hi all! There will be more to come. Life is quite busy of late.

As for your Jesse Chamber’s story. I know it’s been far too long, terribly sorry. I will get round to it. Please bare with me :)

Booo! Nothing happens. Is this going to be one of those 10 single page chapter links?

I am seriously looking forward to Part III and Blake's further acceptance of her submission and her Master's training of his new slave.

Lovely premise.

But all sex is much too rushed. Much too automatic. Much too mechanical.

No exploration of his cock and his balls? No learning what it/he liked?

No dialog about blowjob during it?

No description of her pussy? Shaved? Manicured? Hairy?

Nothing with her breasts?...

I do have a series which has Kartik in a role. The series is called Power Player. It's available on smashwords.

Gotta have more!

It's still sitting in Pending. From what I'm reading it hasn't been long enough for support to get involved.

Do chapter 2 please.

Really hope this gets continued

Okay, I stopped halfway down the first page to come write this comment: you're a great writer and I really enjoy your prose but the exaggerated italics are *killing* me. What I initially thought was a satirical style choice based on the source material came way too fast and way to...

Thanks for the chapter

We need this thing up!!! Keyes Keyes Keyes !!!!!!!

Hey! It's me, Flashtastic. Will you do my Violett Beane's Jesse Chambers's symbiote story anytime soon? It's been almost a year.

I am very impressed with what you've done here. Many comic fans bounce these characters off each other in their heads, who'd be with who, how would the various pieces fit together. This is incredible, in the way it works, in the way you deftly blend the bits of continuity through....

great start to a good idea

Next chapter please! What happens next with Mary Jane and the symbiote?

I love this story. Well written. I hope there will be more to come.

I love this story. Well written Doctor who fic. I hope there will be more to come.

U think he should conquer bumblebee and terra next

Would love to see her with Sarah next

I believe both parties experienced a most rewarding fulfilment with more to come!!

Good work look forward to future chapters