Group Sex Story Comments

Outstanding story about the twins. I have my own twin stories on here - similar. You outdid yourself and me. Great job. 5/5/5/5/5.

Steve

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The last sentence killed the story Went from a 5 to a 2

Loved the unbridled eroticism of this story. Very well written. 5 stars

This story is made so much better by the wife's reaction! So sexy!

Wonderfully written, the plot and the threesome just came up seamlessly.

Can't wait to read more from you!

Great work. So much further for this to go - very sexy but you managed a strong backstory without taking pages of preamble, really generated character definition so easily. Lots of fun, hope you keep writing

It was the Midsummer’s Night Dream that really made it work.

Fabulous uninhibited fun for four. Loved it!

ryeandgingerayle2@yahoo.ca

Gary went to the other side of the bed and buried his face in his wife's crotch, still oozing our combined love juices. I could hear him licking and sucking his wife's just-fucked pussy. It aroused me and I reached down to explore Barb's nether region. She turned to make it easier....

great story to jack off with,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,

Love the story but the constant illiteration yanks me out of every scene.

hot story apart from the abusing of the sleeping woman by her own husband

I thought it was a great story and he is a very lucky man to be marrying such a great slut to satisfy all of their sexual fantasies. There needs to be a very hung black man included in the next chapter.

A very understanding husband.

At first I was mad that Belle didn't receive any consequences for her actions, but I'm starting to see how it showed how controlling and manipulative she is. I'm hoping Matt and the rest of the girls start to realize how toxic she is before it is too late.

Would have loved an expanded description of the activities instead of the clif-note version.

Great storytelling! I am looking forward to the next parts.

Not bad. Sounds like something my slut wife would dream up.

You should fuck Sally in gratitude. 5/5 stars

good work

Should have gotten down and did cleanup

YUM YUM

SUPER HOT STORY!!!!!!!!!! 5 stars from here ;)

right on! my kind of story,,well written and very erotic,

One of my favourite authors for when I am feeling sexy, her stories get me so wet, I need very little finger stimulation before I have an intense orgasm. Like I said before,, it's a pity they didn't double penetrated her.

Strangely enough, this sounds like a true story. It's written like a "Fond Memory".

Two comments: The first is, how can you and so many other authors have the man fuck a woman's rectum without any lubrication (and vaginal fluid does not really work, trust me) -- the second is, referring to a woman's sexy derriere as a "shitter" just sounds too vulgar -- unless she's...

Classic! Sweet! What a wife!

... for a sequel here! You can't leave it hanging like that, there has to be more!!! Thanks for sharing, too.

Cunt is a pornstar put the video online and watch it go viral.

I am so tired of this "pussy stretching" myth - guys, are your peckers really so small you have to make up these fantasies of invincible monster sledgehammers that don't fit in a woman's vagina?! this is ridiculous!

I've heard stories of some girls with very small vaginas (yes, they...

Cute story.

I saw the 1964 film before, and I thought it would give me the creeps to read something based on it. Cary Grant was 60 when Father Goose came out, and I think the children ranged from roughly ages 8-15. But, I think you changed the characters and circumstances enough...

Perfect

Tess (uk)

Mmmm. This was very hot!

To tjb50cal - isn't POS supposed to be capitalized?