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"The special area is a sacred life giving place and must be taken care of, by every acolyte to the best of her capabilities." she recited dutifully

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Now thats a twist I did not expect, it also raises two questions.

1. Does this mean that the cult Melody, and by extension,...

Every couple should at least try it, you know the guy wants to try it!!! Hot story, waiting for part 2

That was an awesome story. I hope that there will be more. I am looking forward to Mistress Jennifer making him change into yoga pants, girls midriff shirt and panties when she next sees him at the gym.

Thank you for writing and posting here.

Fantastic!!

Oh my, I love it! I need some doctor play, that got me so hot and bothered 💦💦💦 Thank you for sharing xx

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I really like this.

I like the descriptions of being embarrassed about how large his penis is.

I like how the girlfriend likes how quick he is.

I like how wholesome it has been so far.

I agree with everything in Yarglenup's comment. This story has the right amount of detail to make it tantalizingly good.

Such a great read that was!

OK premise.

But all the sex is much too fast. Too automatic. Too mechanical.

Needed to slow down.

Needed more preliminaries/foreplay. Needed step-by-step details/descriptions.

Two stars.

There was no way Rasheed should bowed to Michelle's blackmail. What he should have said was I'm leaving and I'm going straight to the dean of students. I'm sure after I tell him what you're doing here tonight your fraternity will have your charter revoked and no one will ever go through...

Dude I and am sure many others love this story. Please don't stop it on account of a few bad apples 😅

The butt plug was also an interesting touch, though unexplained.

My current wife has used butt plugs to stop up her pussy when she came home from being fucked with a load of jizz for me. I don't like the PVC taste polluting the creampie taste, but I appreciate the effort.

Rye

Interesting story! My third wife also enjoyed falling asleep with my cock in her mouth. She just loved cocks - all sizes, colours, soft, hard, married, single - it didn't matter. Actually, she enjoyed married-and-cheating cocks more than single ones, but my point is that she enjoyed...

Plead keep writing!!!

Great story, love to see a sequel with Scott Anderson and Aubrey.

The premise has potential, but I feel like your writing lacks something for me personally. I love the setup, but the actual scenes feel kinda like telling, not showing. Also, I feel like it’s “too easy” for the first conquest. Rather, a slow degradation/moral degeneration is way hotter...

The storyline was ok but the repetitive use of „sissy” is just annoying after a while.

Just a ord of advice though, talk about limits and safewords before you start a scene. In real life, she could have really hurt him.

Who are you and how did it take this long to find this series?

Mazing what a old impotent guy can come up these days while fantasizing with his wife's secret boyfriends.

Please please please write a part 6

My favorite writer by far! I’m personally on team Petra, I want to see how deep she can manipulate Roman and what she can make him do. Adding her spit to his food or only eating her chewed food or even going as far as a toilet femdom. It’s your story though. I’m just not a big fan...

Thank you for your kind comments.

Well written. I had the feeling that the author had experienced a lot of what happened in the story, but not everything. I would love to help her find out what it all felt like. Pervert that I am, I enjoyed the description of the shit slipping from her gaping ass hole, and the...

As long as he is the only one who owns his wife heart, and she's not trying to humiliate him then I don't see a problem. I mean even the oldest of us took biology classes focusing on more than reproduction, which also helps to make his wifes case, but also values, attitudes, and negotiation...

Wow, hot chapter!

I felt like it was missing Mark a bit. I really want to see more of Chelsea slowly training him to accept and love her need for Dylan. It felt like that was missing from this chapter. "Beth wants to Cuckold Her Husband" has some of this dynamic, but you do it even...

Loved everything about it 😍

Incredible story. I would love some weight gain or cumflation parts to it, too.

Hot

Ideas that include voyeurism, spying on his wife and her new daddy. leading up to the wedding cuckold that John bears witness too. hard as steel. maybe in chastity on his honeymoon as she frollicks with daddy in the pool or sea as he just looks on...in shock and lust rrrrrr poor guy...

Somebody needs an editor. Example: starring and staring have totally different means in the real world. Don't make your readers scan backwards to work out what you actually intended to convey to them.

Very well written, by a person who has experienced the joys of enemas! It is my sincere wish that I could meet the author in person. There is so much we could share. Thank you very much.

Thank you for your kind comments.

There will be more to come soon.

The next update won't be a year apart, like parts2 and 3 were!

I really enjoyed this. Thank you!

Engaging and irresistible. I love how you expressed the course of Kelly’s feelings and emotions throughout this sexy story.