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Love it, can’t wait for more!

This needs to be updated ASAP I would pay to read the whole series

Great read. Definitely needs to be continued.

just want to mention that i really enjoy your pre- and afterwords as well as your hashtags show some of your brilliant humor. Love it, hope you're well

it seemed terribly stupid of Mike not to inform anybody about the groundrule no1 not to invide anybody into the house. He should have learned that, but as long it doesen't got a mushi he seemes not to care more than where to get his next eggo as long as Sofia did not cater the dishes....

To the arizona!

Sequel, please!

This series is a gem! There is no other story quite like it. Only wish there were more entries to it!

Why do you start stories you can't finish?

This is some amazing work. I like the reveal of the cat girl.

The lack of introspection is a little unnerving. It's as if the characters don't worry that much about what's happening to them (and that includes becoming friends-with-benefits) and it's a shame because it would give so much more weight to the sex scenes.

Anyway, I like it so far....

Haven't seen another chapter from you for some time.

I would have thought with the Fallout Series being released this would have re-energized your writing desire for this story. But it seems not.

Are you done writing this story now???

You have a very good premise and plotlines going...

Very good story so far. Since this is a multi book effort, here are a couple of ideas to maybe take it up a level...

Only a couple of chapters ago the story started feeling kind of thin due to the lack of new characters.

The main characters are in school and their lack of interaction...

Well, word coming in of the return of the Greywolf pack should get Jax's attention. Especially when he realizes its a surviving alpha heir. She would be the only one who could best him and satisfy his cat's requirements. He is also probably the best candidate for assisting madam...

ANAZING!!!!!!!!

Your stories respectful nod to the sacrifices made by the few for the lives of their loved one, is simply fantastic!

Tenacious, indeed.

You continue to do great work.

I don't understand how you think that anyone could start from the beginning and get caught up on this, not to mention the other stories, in two weeks! It took me some 8 months to catch up to chapter 103, plus the other stories (great also). Then...

When is the movie coming out? Good story that seems tailor-made for filming, although the makeup artists will be busy.

Great way to pay honour to the crew of the Arizona. Fair winds and a following sea to the brave men, evermore.

LEST WE FORGET.

Wow... just wow... amazing story as always.

It's got to be time for a rest and fuckation foe the Radley clan before dickwad in the wheel chair comes back...

Ummm... Hephaestus was obviously wrong, should have gone Hawaiian... Pele maybe? Let's find out...

ON TO THE NEXT CHAPTER!!! (runs)

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I didn't expect to have a emotional response to a erotic story thank you for the nod to the Arizona from a old soldier

Loved it but need a part 2

What can i say.. it was epic. Shame she didnt find a new mate. I had to finish reading this. So capivated. Awsone

why is this chapter in the middle of the other two?

Guess like mother like daughter. Claire is going to be her mate. She already took it upon herself to share the alpha's bed in her cat form. She must have clearly known even if its taking Torie a bit longer to figure it out.

Torie will have lots of alphas and council to meet and...

Such a hot and equally sweet story: 10/10

Wow! That was completely unexpected. Great job.

Where's Chapter 01?

Pointless to chop “chapters” into such tiny, sparse slivers. You have talent, and interested many with the start of this series, but whatever you are doing is exceptionally off putting. I’m out.

Five stars, and thank you for it.

Excellent. The plot line is fresh.

Incredible chapter. Maybe one of your best. And as so many others have started, the use of the Arizona was *chef's kiss* magnificent.

Another great chapter. Thank you for the continuity from last chapter and filling in the blanks on the bus.

This story has everything needed for a fun read: humor, hot sex, romance, mystery, violence, adventure, really

fascinating characters, and interesting historical references. I'm a big fan!