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Yes, that will be fine. I have no Leda what the list is.

Probably your best chapter ever.

Good story. English second language?

Thanks blackcockrider!

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Thanks, TxxxBWC87... I appreciate the kind comment!

The art isn't much to write home about.

Loved the storyline. Reminds me of those college days.

To all the haters:: It’s a fantasy.

Maybe the hottest story I’ve read here this year. Of course everything about it is wrong, and that’s part of the appeal.

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Great story Don! I wish I could give you more than 5 stars! I sure wish you would write another chapter. As another

commentator stated, this story has some realism to it.

holy shit

Thank you for sharing this unique story. Please write another. What else is rattling around in your head?

Hooked

@sbrooks103x Thank you for your comment. The idea that I "forced" the story into a 750-word format isn't accurate. I was practicing and wrote several stories in that format with the 750-word project in mind. I truly enjoy writing them. To me, it's a skill to work on. More with less....

Strange ending to a good story. I liked it. The ex revealed such a nasty personality when cheating and after that I must wonder why he didn't see that sooner.

great premise and plot, and pretty well written. But you either need to get a proofreader/editor or double-check your work and run it through Grammarly™ or another grammar/spelling checker.

If lined up for confession about what we thought about doing, wanted to do, tried to do, actually did do -

Maybe I'm the only rotten pervert that would be neutered with a rusty knife .....

trappedinthecl0set,

Thanks! I'm glad you enjoyed that element. I do feel like, especially with stories told by one character, it makes sense for us to share the limits of their perception. Beyond that, sometimes the superposition of two possibilities is more exciting than either one...

To Anonymous who commented on my post. What I thought I made clear is that almost thirty years is a long time, and things that people may do in their early ‘20’s are likely the result of different motivations than what people do in their late ‘40’s, even when it comes to sex. Anyone...

@Cagivagurl - thank you so much 😊 Emily

Looking forward to the next part.

Thanks for your writing,

Now I think this story needs to evolve to where Carol has her anal virginity taken by either of the men while the other is firmly planted in her pussy. Then, upon realising they love this, they form a relationship and one night take a step further and both take her sweet pussy and...

Now that’s great sexy curvy women in stockings and heels. Hopefully there’s more.

Very, very good story!! But seriously, I would have punched Rick in the face. He had fun with Jane, but went bonkers when he learned it was a setup. So instead of being cool and having a good laugh about it, he was a sanctimonious hypocrite and ended up wasting ten years of his life!...

I especially like the Texas setting. Your knowledge about the age of consent in Texas being 17 leads me to believe that you live here, or at least grew up here.

I'd love to exchange emails with you if you're interested. Maybe bounce story ideas back and forth to each other. I'm your...

5 stars for a good read.

It made me stay till the end. Made me think and entertained me.

A pleasure these days.

You write with your own style and I like that.

Cagivagurl

More please. I love it.

One of the best ever. Just loved it. Glad she showed him the way and he was man enough to take it! Got me so hot and bothered. xoxo, Di

ouch... This Jenny character is a little too dim to be likeable. Good drama. thanks for sharing that.

Cinco Estrellas for this one too.

Not bad very long though. Honestly I got lost for a minute there but for the most part it was pretty good!

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I agree with IJS0904's critique. I'm a sucker for the haunted house genre, and you have many different paths you could take this. Cheers!

Good follow up story!

5

Once again another great story⭐️⭐️⭐️⭐️⭐️

Just beautiful. I loved it. xoxo, Di