BDSM Story Comments

I hope this story has thousands of chapters :)

Very realistic well worth 5*

A follow up story would be greatly appreciated. Any chance that The Wife and The Mistress have a falling out over the rights to Sam's talented, submissive mouth?

These two characters are very fresh and likable. Why don't you write a prequel, in which you see the Vanilla friends bored by how romantically cheesy the two of them look, and then also write a sequel, in which one girl forces the other to wear something embarrassing (it doesn't have...

Enjoying, Thanks for your writing.

hi @ anon - yes this has been performed a few times, including on Literotica. If you want to read it for Literotica or reddit, that is totally cool. If anywhere else, please get in touch via Lit messaging, Lit chat, on reddit or twitter (same username). Ryan

Definitely not enough, no!

hey what is happening with the neetu bhola trilogy can we expect it in next 2 months? loved this one!!!

Fabulous, so very hot in a frozen kind of way

Great story! I love the commitment to the core rules. Please never change.

This exercise is pointless mendacity is made all the worse by the intellectual deficiency your protagonist has.

In other words, he’s a retard and he would be doing everyone a favour if he decided to end his miserable life.

He has no desire to stand up for himself or his wife. He...

Is this something you’d be open to another author/voice actor performing?

This was such a great story, I still think you could add more chapters to the story in the future :)

Long part wanted

Great erotic prose from a masterful writer…makes me drip with anticipation of what next for the sub(s).

More please, I'd like to see where you go with it.

Turned the story in to nothing more then a gay Fantasy now. Yes Thailand does have some very good looking Katoys, ladyboys, to in your world Transvestites, some even look better then real women. But they just took you for a $800 ride, you poor little sick boy....

Chapter 4, The family reunion, father and brother come to visit.

You’re revealing so many of Lisa’s conflicted thoughts and emotions are exceptional and really add erotic depth to this story. Fantastic!

Hello!Great story!I hope you will add chapters, probably chapter is deleted because if some words go e too Underage. in first chapter you mentioned underage persons,and Literotica has very strictly about that.

Perfectly written story.

I enjoyed the story very much. But I think it would not be satisfying to serve a robot who could not feel happiness or take pleasure from my service and devotion to her.

I love it!

🔥🔥🔥

Wow, absolutely incredible. The whole thing sounds blissful! 5 stars.

Thanks for sharing

Tess (uk)

You are amazing.. great writing

Urgh I love a good Dom cuck sissy story but it's taken too far into psycho territory now. I say this as someone who's loved a few parts of this

So very erotic!

Loved it. This couple are really into it. It turned me on.

Appreciate the thoughtful comments of Thatsclever. Glad you are enjoying the story even if it is somewhat challenging.

You’ve written a story about a girl friend’s mother who is clearly a sadist psycho. Any young man with at least a partially functioning brain would get the hell out of there as fast as they can. He should dump the narcissistic girl friend, also. The only future contact he should have...

Oh my Donna, that was amazing! It resonated deeply within me! Thank you for the incredible story! alexa

5 stars! Awesome. Hot. More please!

Oh Mynt...what a hot sexy story.

Anonymous, thank you! I'm glad you enjoy the work. As for your scene suggestion, I don't know how well it would go over, but it does sound like a hilarious way for him to spend a Saturday. Lol.

Thanks for your writing.