Incest/Taboo Story Comments

Great stuff!

Overall super hot story but the thing that bothered me most was Dan got away very lightly. No way Tom and Sara should have forgiven him so easily.

Beach ball size tits? 11” cock? Everyone else in the family is a hot, beautiful woman? Sounds like the wet dream of a pubescent boy.

Nice slow buildup from the panty playing, masturbation, mutual masturbating and then to the son and mother actually having sex. Sure made it hard to read with only one hand, but I'm not complaining. I was going to give the story four stars because he kept calling her "mummy", not...

CINCO ESTRELLAS!

The son enjoying the Spanish beaches, understandable. The son bringing up the beaches and trying to get his sister naked at the house in their first conversation after he got home, forced and shallow.

Have the sister see some pictures he took at the beach that revealed he went to...

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Absolutely fucking loved it! Five stars and a favorite point!

I'm confused, lived in a different state, then in town a few miles from us. I guess that could be true depending on where the state line was if you want to get technical. My MIL did live in another state and when my wife and I visited her she had us sleep in the master bedroom. When...

Way too many kids, very predictable, mom took a hard turn just because she saw the sons dick? The whole thing just felt shallow.

Good story so far.

Thanks for sharing

Very Funny...Very Fun...and VERY HOT!!

I loved the cartoon references (even tho' I very much dislike Marvin the Martian...ick!!)

Brother licks sister, butt and pussy...my sister does not know what she misses out on, from me!!

Five Stars...💫💫💫💫💫🔥🌋💯

Five**5**Stars...this is the way to start this...🌌🌌🌌🌌🌌🌋🌋🌋🌋🌋💥💥💥💥💥💯🌪️

Jake laughing when he was told dad had an "accident""...he has grown up with dad doing stuff that ends him up in the ER and/or hospital. That is escalated to his throwing a clot/having a stroke...that...

This was a very charming story. Didn't expect proud Jade to enjoy getting down and dirty. Great account of bodily functions.

Hello, thank you for this story

The idea was good and it made sense in places.

It was great to read how he dominated her. but there is so much to experience.

Then the shitty end came. I've never read such a bad ending.

the ending from the brain of a 12 year old.

Please write a second...

Great start! Looking forward to where this story is heading, more chapters soon, I HOPE!!

Wow that was short

I loved it please continue take us deeper into your fantasy while at the same time take us deeper into our own fantasy

Too many people involved too quickly

This has to be the best version of the 'carrot and stick' method I've ever read! Caroline gets what she wants for her son by promising him more and more. Pity about the anonymous comment that urges you to find an editor. Whoever wrote it makes the excuse that (s)he couldn't read the...

WOW another Awesome Chapter

It was Great to see Sasha take out Derek He definitely deserved it, though she should have tortured him more.

Looking forward to Chapter 14, to see if Tanya will become a member of the Harem/Pack.

5 Stars if I could vote.

Thanks for your time and effort.

You just left this review on my latest story: "And just like that a story is ruined with ridiculous measurements. 32E. 1 star."

What is ridiculous about 32E? It certainly doesn't represent a small busted woman, but it's fairly common and average.

If you think the story is poor...

Durth, This Story was written twenty years ago and the Author quit writeing in 2008, So no, there will never be a sequel to this story

@live4thebj, please enlighten me, what is so ridiculous about a 32E bra size?

A little busy for me, but really hot.

Yes it needs more chapters!!!

5 stars!

Nice

Nice follow up

5 stars for a 'quickie'.....

Porn videos HAVE to aay 'step' brother or 'step' sister, mom etc.

Interesting that a story can be full incest though...

The 'taboo' element takes it a step further into sublime doesn't it?

I don't desire a family member personally but I sure enjoy reading...

Oops....

Cat's out of the bag now!

4 stars

Sure wish I had an Emily in my life....

Love the story. Like it all the more if there are conversations.

Great story, hope there are more chapters to cum.

I loved the story. Mine is different

My older sister molested me when I was twelve

Taught me how to take care of her needs first. One day we were fooling around she had a surprise for me bringing our younger sister in the room told me to take her it was her first time. I was in...

Well that was weird.