First Time Story Comments

I'm looking forward to reading more.

This is great!!

Well written and very erotic. You’ll have to get over the comments from the insecure misogynistic brigade - I’m afraid they’re triggered by a wife who isn’t their possession, despite the husband’s permission and enjoyment. I hope we get to hear about the threesome when they get home.

Another refreshing story that is a flashback fo many people to their youth. Totally enjoyed every work of it. Fantastic job and a pleasant read

Less of a train wreck this time, and I still can’t look away. 5 stars, less begrudgingly this time. I’m not big into the dom and sub thing, but I can see how people would be

Very good, it had the right development and expected ending. She will definetly start having more sex with ben despite having a boyfriend, hope for a part 2 where we can see that.

very hot! Empathetic and rewarded for her care of him. Would enjoy feeling that giant cock and big stretch myself.

It was a good story should have continued 😢

Just like our first time!

So...did he pull it out?

Jack is an asshole. If you love someone, you know you love them…

Killian is an asshole. If you love someone, you know you love them…

Logan is an asshole. You don’t go after your brother’s girl. He even said “I figured you’d be together by now.” You can see when people are secretly...

A sweet, touching, well written story.

Anyone else think we are just never ever going to get another chapter?

I gave you a 5- (4.6 = 92%, ☆☆☆☆☆!)

Very hot..imagining myself being face down and bred by a dominant gay man…a life changed forever..cunted

JT

Definitely a story I'm going to read over and over again.

Math is singular; i.e., math not maths.

As with most of your stories you don’t hurry the ending, it’s fresh sexy and plausible. Well done

Gawd...another 5 and fave

SUPERB series...really surprised so few comments and that last was 2 yrs ago.

Curious when these were written, how much time between them, if you're still writing, and if that waitress came to play with them...also LOVED she had a butt plug in too, and had...

They're GREAT, and naughty...!

LOVE that there's more...age play, public exhibitionism, she wants to be spanked...never been a turn-on for me before but in this story, with her, it is-both love the way she tastes, and only her third-?!? wasn't clear to me if that was smoking cock,...

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Stories like this are so refreshing and a ray of sunshine in a dismal world. More stories like this are more entertaining than lustful. Another favorite story. Great job.

A fantastic change of pace. A true ❤️ story.Flashbacks of youth, innocence and truth. Definitely, could use a few more stories like this one. A part 2 would have been great.

Pieter needs to fill her cunt with cum and leave her with a baby bump.

Very good story, I'm looking forward to more of your writing.

Excellent story, enjoyed reading it

I felt for Thomas throughout your story - which is why I'm crying now

I too have lost the love of my life - an asthma attack killed her much too soon in her life

I thought I had learnt to handle the pain, after so many years without Carol - but your exemplary tale proved me wrong

makes me want to cum.....so i did!

I can understand the sceptical view previously but you say this is real. Much more exciting than my first time by miles, or since.

Your writing is somewhat mechanical, more task written than flowing but that is your style. Thx for sharing your experience

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I liked it i even ran a quick ad on craigslist bad bad boy good story

Penis tube?

Well I am hooked. You are a great story teller. Please write more

Very nicely done. More would be very nice !!

@Anonymous, to address your comment -- and thank you for reading and taking the time to comment -- you list a lot of things that you feel are missing from my story. Right near the beginning of the story, I wrote that they had already engaged in "plenty of kissing and heavy petting."...