Group Sex Story Comments

Classic! Sweet! What a wife!

... for a sequel here! You can't leave it hanging like that, there has to be more!!! Thanks for sharing, too.

Cunt is a pornstar put the video online and watch it go viral.

I am so tired of this "pussy stretching" myth - guys, are your peckers really so small you have to make up these fantasies of invincible monster sledgehammers that don't fit in a woman's vagina?! this is ridiculous!

I've heard stories of some girls with very small vaginas (yes, they...

Cute story.

I saw the 1964 film before, and I thought it would give me the creeps to read something based on it. Cary Grant was 60 when Father Goose came out, and I think the children ranged from roughly ages 8-15. But, I think you changed the characters and circumstances enough...

Perfect

Tess (uk)

Mmmm. This was very hot!

To tjb50cal - isn't POS supposed to be capitalized?

Ready to see how this unfolds for the little slut. Cheers

Teach44. Totally agree about Belle. But now I'm wondering If Matty is going to deal with the fact that he hate fucked one of the girls he loves so much. That act of sex while real anger seems antithetical to who he is and how he identifies himself.

That said, I've been loving this...

You have developed very interesting characters. They certainly need to be part of further development and exploration in additional stories.

Your writing is talented. Please write more.

Another fun chapter! More, please!!

Now I think this story needs to evolve to where Carol has her anal virginity taken by either of the men while the other is firmly planted in her pussy. Then, upon realising they love this, they form a relationship and one night take a step further and both take her sweet pussy and...

WOW! WOW!!! Just plain WOW! Thank you.

10 Big Blazing Stars for a fun story. I never realized how sexy and fun dogging was until I read this story. I have spent most of my adult life taking my woman (GF or Wife) of the moment to bars to show off her breasts and maybe get her fucked and this method makes it so much easier....

That’s hot.

Thank you! There is definitely more coming.

There’s some serious trauma in Eva’s background.

Possible scenario for the next chapter:

Caleb goes home with a dozen or so eager women, including his wife. He and his wife have sex, and they both fall into a regenerative coma. Which, of course, isn't even mentioned on the one page leaflet that is all those other women have available....

Use you spelling/ grammar check, also, put the story away for a few days, or a week, and read it with fresh eyes. Read it allowed, if possible, and read it several times before posting. You'll catch little things.

Otherwise, try not making the dom/sub switch be so brutal. Think of...

Loved it. More please!

"This weekend we will begin your transformation."

As if being fucked on all her holes by four men in one afternoon did not cement her new role, there obviously is much, much more to come. I am looking forward to the next chapter.

extremely kinky loved it!!!

I'm outta here. You use 3 or 4 plot devices/key phrases and simply repeat them every few pages. The "spectrum", the "oxytocin", and the "g spot" can be viable only once or twice, after that it's just filler. Plot development is made of multiple layers of narrative, character awareness...

Another very enjoyable chapter. The mystery of Eva's trauma and what is going on with Skylar peak the interest. Belle drama continues.... Will there be another perspective BTC candidate? Love this story

Thanks

Good read so far some of the spelling and typos and grammar errors are a problem, so only a four from me. But I’m looking forward to the rest of the chapters.

To Coldxxx - Actually the ending was appropriate. It's not unusual for someone shipwrecked and suffering from exposure to have fantasy dreams.. and I loved the fantasy...

I am very happy to read the continuing adventures of the club, looking forward to many new stories.

I would love to bend over for both Meg and Lexie! Use me for your pleasure! Crack my nuts! Stuff my butt! Sick my cock as I lick your clits!

Really? Mentioning "being on the spectrum" five (5) times on the first page is a little much. Once or twice would have been enough. I can't wait (groan) to see how many more times you use it.

It was bad enough watching Bell's character get ruined in part 1, it was bad enough enough Bell was still in the group when every other girl was a better character, but this was utter shit. Give up on writing

Please tell me you’re planning a part 2! That was fantastic, very well written.

Pretty damned sad story...2nd part is worse.....

Ughhh! Painful! It desperately needs a chapter 5, where he connects back with Courtney.

5 Stars!! I was hard the whole time reading and wishing I was Alex's character!! Would live to have a hard cock in my mouth and ass and then eat a sloppy pussy and asshole!!