NonHuman Story Comments

Very good story so far. Since this is a multi book effort, here are a couple of ideas to maybe take it up a level...

Only a couple of chapters ago the story started feeling kind of thin due to the lack of new characters.

The main characters are in school and their lack of interaction...

Well, word coming in of the return of the Greywolf pack should get Jax's attention. Especially when he realizes its a surviving alpha heir. She would be the only one who could best him and satisfy his cat's requirements. He is also probably the best candidate for assisting madam...

ANAZING!!!!!!!!

Your stories respectful nod to the sacrifices made by the few for the lives of their loved one, is simply fantastic!

Tenacious, indeed.

You continue to do great work.

I don't understand how you think that anyone could start from the beginning and get caught up on this, not to mention the other stories, in two weeks! It took me some 8 months to catch up to chapter 103, plus the other stories (great also). Then...

When is the movie coming out? Good story that seems tailor-made for filming, although the makeup artists will be busy.

Great way to pay honour to the crew of the Arizona. Fair winds and a following sea to the brave men, evermore.

LEST WE FORGET.

Wow... just wow... amazing story as always.

It's got to be time for a rest and fuckation foe the Radley clan before dickwad in the wheel chair comes back...

Ummm... Hephaestus was obviously wrong, should have gone Hawaiian... Pele maybe? Let's find out...

ON TO THE NEXT CHAPTER!!! (runs)

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I didn't expect to have a emotional response to a erotic story thank you for the nod to the Arizona from a old soldier

Loved it but need a part 2

What can i say.. it was epic. Shame she didnt find a new mate. I had to finish reading this. So capivated. Awsone

why is this chapter in the middle of the other two?

Guess like mother like daughter. Claire is going to be her mate. She already took it upon herself to share the alpha's bed in her cat form. She must have clearly known even if its taking Torie a bit longer to figure it out.

Torie will have lots of alphas and council to meet and...

Such a hot and equally sweet story: 10/10

Wow! That was completely unexpected. Great job.

Where's Chapter 01?

Pointless to chop “chapters” into such tiny, sparse slivers. You have talent, and interested many with the start of this series, but whatever you are doing is exceptionally off putting. I’m out.

Five stars, and thank you for it.

Excellent. The plot line is fresh.

Incredible chapter. Maybe one of your best. And as so many others have started, the use of the Arizona was *chef's kiss* magnificent.

Another great chapter. Thank you for the continuity from last chapter and filling in the blanks on the bus.

This story has everything needed for a fun read: humor, hot sex, romance, mystery, violence, adventure, really

fascinating characters, and interesting historical references. I'm a big fan!

Please, write more chapters! That was wonderful❤️

That was bizarrely compelling. I'm glad that she was so nice about it. Now I need a piece of apple pie. It's a good thing that I've got one in the freezer ready to bake. Thanks for the story!

Title made me think this is another anime inspired fantasy with enlargening body parts and silly sex scenes but to my surprise so far was much more or largely different with great story building.

Love the writing and how the story captured me as reader.

And not having one of my...

Mhmmm horse cock stories are so good. Love your writing can't wait to read more.🥵

Always awesome!😎👍🏼❤️Thank you!

Fantabulous! I'm hooked!

This was REALLY good, bravo.

Now I want to see more of it too, so if you have plans for additional chapters i'm all in for 'em.

As soon as you said Mike's property was in the caldera, I immediately thought of Hephaestus with his forge, fired by a dragon... ummm, i mean that the mermen were killed by a volcanic vent opening under water before resealing itself once the internal pressure was released. A natural...

Wonderful back-story fill-in which explains a lot. Highly evident the writer's talents and abilities expanded greatly in order to write such emotional passages of psychic pain made into advantage. I write this as I finish the HHFM run, excited to start over and read it again with...

Great as usual, only now I have to wait for the next chapter..

Read it on Patreon, but I’ve been waiting in ambush to comment on it here. So few authors really show the aftermath of trauma, and you are doing it really well here. Thank you for it!

Don't underestimate the combat power of Sex Magic.