Mature & Age Difference Story Comments

As erotica goes it is an average story.

Very predictable.

Another chapter would likely have the two gals hook up.

A good proofreading would be helpful.

Diese Geschichte ist der absolute Wahnsinn ich hoffe es gibt noch mehrere geile Fortsetzungen dieser Serie. Geil wäre wenn Albert und Sarah irgendwann Alex zu kucken lassen und er vielleicht nach dem ficken beide sauber lecken darf.

Very hot, one of my fantasies I had a very sexy health class teacher in highschool

Well structured. Very convincing.

Excellent, almost perfect, maybe the best story on this entire board.

Drama, character: defined by actions, words, dynamics, growth, and potential

Plot, romance, eroticism, hope for the future

Two damaged people finding and helping each other, and starting to bond

If there are any...

More, Please.

Very nice when you making part 4. Always liked reading stories like this.

Bravo!

Very, very good story!!!!!!!!

Loved it. Perfect way to end it. Although... I would love to read a third chapter. And I know it's not for everyone, but it just feels like such a shame to leave the daughter's love go unrequited. It's clear her father has similar feelings for her, too, and Zara seems to be all for...

Need one more story at least

A sad ending, not the one I was hoping for... but wait. A chapter 2 I see. Dare I hope!? I just hope it's not one of those "5 years later" things, she'd been fucked by a bunch of other guys, he's screwed random women, and in the end they end up together and basically they've wasted...

Marry that wonderful woman RIGHT FUCKING NOW Nick you moron! And cherish her until her dying breath. It's rare that anyone finds real true love and it seems these two have. So screw everything else and just enjoy the rare incredible gift. If children is an issue, adoption hello? The...

Definitely one more in this!

Well, my humble opinions about some elements that James put in the comments:

1) Voyeurism and the landscapers - There will be opportunities for them to admire Lisa some more. With Lisa still living in the house…

Well, like I said in another’s chapters, I see these guys like us, the...

The last paragraph says it all "We're not as good as we once was, but we are as good once as we ever was". RIP Toby Keith.

Good story. English second language?

Excellent story, five stars. But, man, you really need a proofreader.

That was a terrific turn, on to Chapter 5

Well done

every chapter of this story was worse than the one prior, including this shit sandwich of a part 4. thank goodness you stopped working on it, though it would have been a challenge, to somehow continue the downward death spiral you managed in the first 4 installments.

"38DD (yes they are real)" comment cracked me the fuck up. Like that's a good thing? Newsflash: 38 band size means you are at LEAST 40 pounds overwight, and a shit ton of extra body fat around your entire torso, not just a pair of fat, saggy tits. In other words, gross, heifer-like...

Appreciate the anal warning tag, saved me a few pages, or the rest of this story.

Man I like this chapter of the story and hope it continues well! Also I agree that maybe at some point Lillian would realize that Paul was saying the truth and that Henri was only trying to get into her pants...but the twist should be that she doesn't care anymore, that she's too...

Good story. I have been with a couple women in their 70’s , it is awesome but not sure about women in their 80’s. That’s a little over the top, even for me.

'Consensual rape' is a game my ex and I explored several times, much to our mutual delight.

Another story about Luke and Katie would be good. Sara needs her own man.

Better late than never; a new story featuring Luke and Katie - "All Grown Up" - is now available! I hope you enjoy it.

Fantastic story. Please continue this series. Would like to see how their relationship develops without Alex knowing. A few public meetings would be fun

I like the flow of your story: starting in your daily life and ending there. And in between a positive situation to be remembered. That is authentical. And that is what I enjoy. Thank you for sharing.

Nice premise.

But too straightforward.

Needed to slow down.

Needed more step-by-step action/details.

Needed her taking some of the lead.

When you jerk off, do you think about me? How often? What do you envision happening?

What do you like best? Doing stuff to me, or me doing to...

Pretty hot1

Literotica has provided lots of much needed distraction for me as I serve as the primary caregiver for my wife of 53 years. She is terminally ill with the end to come in the not too distant future. I cried tears of joy and sorrow as I read this story...thank you so much for assembling...

@hobie1010 also funny thing about these all being the same...have you finished "my mom is my friend's new gf"? That legitimately has a happy ending. Go read that lol

Outstanding! Might be one of the best stories I've ever read on here.

Most cases I perfer stories from Women. But this was good indeed.