Erotic Horror Story Comments

Really hope this doesn't turn into another cuck story. Has fairly decent potential.

This is one of the best BDSM stories I have ever read. The flow of the story was really good, the timelines have been wonderful. The shuffle between past and present, the complex thought of a long time isolated prisoner has been well written. It started and ended in that small prison...

holy shit

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I agree with IJS0904's critique. I'm a sucker for the haunted house genre, and you have many different paths you could take this. Cheers!

Good story with a nice mystery that was solved nicely. Guess there was both two women and not two women as I wondered for the first chapter. Ray not sure how to feel about him, sleeping with a married woman even in a dead marriage seems pretty terrible but if not for that he'd be...

Coraline. Found it.

Very interesting. Can't wait for more

Great start! Eagerly awaiting the next instalment.

Thank you, excellent writing!

I'm looking forward to where you take this story. You've set the stage, and we will see what happens to our protagonist. Nice start and excellent writing.

Great story!

If I could not access this story for whatever reason... I would weep.

What movie is this inspired by?

Anonymous (from nine hours ago), I'm happy to say I have! I wrote a five book series called Dark the Night that takes this concept and really blows it out. Vampires, redneck necromancers, sirens, the works. It's available on Kindle and Kindle Unlimited. The first in the series is...

Wow that was depressing, interested to see where this goes though and how the house enters into this.

God that was hot!

Love the story so far. But I've a few questions. Did you forget about the infected girls: Lilly (who was captured by some goverment agency) Erin (who fought hard against Megan to not be transformed) and Drew (the girl who walked in on Erin fucking her boyfriend while Megan watched...

Wow!! A hot, hot supernatural tale. A hypersexual bloodsucker looking for a sperm donor. But not just any donor will do; it has to be one who regularly stakes out her tribe. Opposites attract I suppose. But there's some potential to the story. You can try to expand on this.

Fun read 5*

I loved it. Please continue the story or write another one like it. I love how evil she is

@dmallord - sorry, had missed this - Emily

Thanks very much! :-)

This is why it was listed in the Erotic Horror section instead of the 'Cute Kitty Cat and Bunny' section. :)

"Shower," by a-l-e-x-x is a gif located on DeviantArt.

Thank you so much - this was one of my occasional pieces and I am glad you found it xxxxx

Cannibalism is a bit much

Loved this, very emotional and moving. A tear escaped reading this.

Any chance you can point is in the direction of the art this was inspired by?

I had somehow missed this little gem, (probably the genre), but better late than never. I can only presume that Annette met an unpleasant fate at the hands of her dark master after failing to ultimately defile such a holy place. (Or maybe Annette was the dark master???) Of course,...

Damn, do you have any not erotic work?

Thanks for the ratings and the views. I'm about 3/4 of the way through part two. Anyone have any thoughts on what could be better for the next part?

Well this has been awesome read! Really looking forward to the next book! I just rrqd through both books over the last day, could not get enough and hoped that i could keep reading! Well I can't wait to see what's next for the young warlock and his mysterious castle of succubus!

Needs some work but as this was yrs ago, guessing it's not happening

Enjoying this slow, steady build up of tension.