Romance Story Comments

Hell of a start. I'm looking forward to see how this one develops. 5*

A good story, but all the inconsistencies marred it, as other commenters have pointed out. However, I can see no good reason for Doug to doubt Susan’s story, especially since Phil is dead. Even if she was lying, a tryst with a boss is as common as dirt, and does not necessarily destroy...

Yes, I could go for more, a lot more...

Lovely romance. Astrid’s death seems to hark back to very, very old romances where death stalks the lovers, but love survives; in this case with Caroline.

I don't care what the nay-sayers say, it was excellent. Just my cup of tea. Good morals, good characters, and take care of business. And I'm fairly certain all the bad guys are not still functional, even if some of them may still be walking around upright. AND a happy ending. 8 stars,...

Just a Thank You for your stories. This is the first story I ever read here on Lit, and I have read it at least 3 times. Great job.

Although a near hopeless romantic at heart, The Professor reads too much like a harlequin romance — predictable storyline and characters; a bit too enchanting. Some hints of possible darkness, which is one way to move the relationship. One thought FWIW: Given the “power asymmetry”...

I'm a sad old wit and I'm not ashamed to say that I don't believe much on the internet.

Loved this simple page.

I really enjoyed this story. The songs titles evoked decades

of great listening. A heartfelt Thank you.

I’m a sucker for romance.

I really liked the premise to this series...

a rogue transforms a (semi) virginal, (semi) ugly duckling into a Swan.

Cute, a R rated Hallmark film, or as an earlier commenter made about an earlier chapter, a Pygmalion (My Fair Lady...for the literary challenged) thing.

But getting...

Very interesting concept, really like how they are doing everything together, from sex to car restomod. A road trip with camping sounds great, hope there are more adventures cumming.

Too short and 90% was just an EC genre tale. No insight to how he gets along with Emma or her parents. They are just fuck buddies until she’s pregnant and then he contemplates some feelings? Not a good romance story. 3.4*

I liked it, but did struggle at times with your shifts in the narrator and the thoughts in the different font were confusing at times. For me it made it more difficult to read. I did want to give up a couple of times but was invested in the story so managed to finish it.

Always doing things together, what a wonder couple

I use to write sex advice for a news paper & still do. i ended up divorced but didn't care. I get laid a lot more.

This is a great story! The characters are alive in my mind. So far I have managed to control my urge to look up the history to understand what actually happened.

However. I am a bit concerned since the author wrote they will add new parts weekly but it has been more than a month...

Very good story and well written, thank you! 5 ⭐⭐⭐⭐⭐'s.

Well done !

Why this guy doesn't just burn this asshole to the ground is totally beyond me. It's like, hey - I'm a pretty nice guy, to people who deserve it. Not assholes.

Is been a good series, A couple of things were a bit much in the drama. An di just didnt get how they kust left Ken's mom alone on christmas. I mean if you could already find like 8 open seats on a flight ON CHRISTMAS! why not three more and have them be all together? I still gave...

Ronde, your level of detail always impresses me. I studied journalism in college and was taught to write about things I knew about when first starting out. I can never tell what your background or life experience has been since the details in your stories are generally plentiful and...

This was so painfully written that I couldn’t finish the 1st page. The dialogue is childish- I’d say 3rd grade level. The characters are cliche and unlikeable. 1 ⭐️

A very moving tale, thank you. 5 stars

somewhere east of Omaha

Skin color makes no more difference to a person's character than hair or eye color do.

I've read this a couple of times and each time I like it a bit more. What I would have liked was an epilogue a couple of years in the future where he meets up with one or more of his 'dates' and find they've all had good lives with no regrets.

I really hate stories that make me tear up. I was burned myself on both hands and part of my face but no where near what is described here. 5 stars for this and the rest of the story no matter how it turns out.

Great story line, enjoyed every bit of it, thank you!

What you consider as love is nothing but cheating and selfish behaviour to the fullest!

I am surprised that you have a confusion in even defining love and the difference between love and lust! Love is never selfish…love ensures taht we are willing to sacrifice for our love! What...

Beautiful.

I see the tags but not a fan of the drift towards BDSM. Is Adam just another fictional rich boy predator stalking another innocent? That’s s the picture that’s emerging in my head. 4.4*

Such a nice storey! ⭐️⭐️⭐️⭐️⭐️

Absolutely fantastic. Thank you

Looking forward to another story!

If it wasn't for the name, I would have been surprised. I kept waiting to find out why se was entrapping him. All else was clear.

Well put together. On the like scale a 2, because I think that 'casual' sex on a first 'date' is not right.

However I do not rate on that scale. My scale...

The surprise ending was no surprise. Entertaining, but not much more.

THANK YOU DG! Second time through, 5 stars

somewhere east of Omaha