Sci-Fi & Fantasy Story Comments

Very good story u did great work with ur investigation into story prep. Would b nicevto see this morph into a novel continuing story.

Just seen George you aren't finished with these stories ... great news !!! so many fans of this series and busty space pirates

I hope this gets continued

What a great story! I love the discussions on magic systems and the parallel story lines slowly developing. Some truly interesting characters which I can’t wait to learn more about. It feels like this develops to another wheel of time by sheer endless possibilities where all these...

2 stars for the stupid ending.

With 13 years of experience, best he would be doing is closing in on his second million miles, as on average a good truck driver takes 8 years per million. Even if he was exception a couple million miles would be it, not a few.

Second an experienced driver would never be using his...

Fun stuff, well executed. Looking forward to the mayhem.

In response to MDX47's post: I'm guessing that by the time he reaches tier 3, his marketplace will have opened to such a level that he will be able to just buy the beast cores he needs... I mean the damned things seem to have everything imaginable that he can possibly use at the tier...

OK, a fun start, and a nice only slightly winding path through it. The last question was a nice giveaway without being completion outright. Kind of wanted his answers to some other questions but this was a nice quick route.

This is a top tier story. I really enjoyed it.

Um he jumped as far from his wife as he could, since that was what was asked?? The only way he could have betrayed his wife, is by running away BEHIND her.

I wondered if we'd be able to collect a bunch of superpowers from beat cores.

thi whoe sara thing is anoyying just finish it so sh can be a wife already

I'd suggest breaking up your longer paragraphs-they were daunting to read

Excellent story!

I liked the plot and the well described characters!,,,,

Absolutely phenomenal!!! What an incredible tale. One of the absolute best short stories I’ve ever read, both on, and outside of Lit. If I could only have one “Favorite” this would be it. Five stars, but only because they won’t let me do more.

Thank you for kind comments. Regarding when a song is being conveyed, normally I italicize such passages but the formatting doesn't always make it to every website. Sorry for confusion.

Thank you for any kind comments. Sorry if formatting may have made it confusing--I wrote these stories for a different website in mind and I don't really understand HTML script.

Nate is a slimy manipulative evil douchebag. All charming and lying about friendship and stabs his friend in the back. I know a guy like that. He is a cancer on the face of the earth.

Great start. Going on now.

Most of his stories have a hot guy MC who ends up with a harem of girls with super fun and hot sexcapades, but invariably these turn out to be friends with benefits as both MC and most of the girls continue to play around with their own partners.

So maybe the lesson is that magic...

I enjoyed this interlude and look forward to reading more about Pete and life “outside”

Fun story, wishing the author finished it as one of his published novels.

We already know the lousy prince was in cahoots with the goblins to engineer a fake heroic act to secure the crown. Our hero would become his nemesis while becoming increasingly popular (especially with the...

I very much enjoy this story and can't wait for more chapters..in the mean time i'l just go read your other stoies updates. BTW I think this is a hidden gem. 5/5

Loving how the depth of the story keeps increasing as the chapters go on. I'm in a dilemma now though. Reading each chapter is a real pleasure and binge reading up to a few chapters ago kept the pleasure going. Should I read each chapter as soon as it is available but then have to...

Really like the story but the chapters are too short!

Another great chapter!

Still liking the content quite a bit, but this chapter especially is in serious need of an editor. It got really hard at times to follow what happened, due to the many errors.

Holy hell please continue. This is cocaine for me

Patiently waiting for the next update🙃

Thanks I enjoyed this.

It is a real pity that you aren't posting new chapters here, but I 'get' the reasoning.

I hope your future endeavours are successful.

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Agreed

I really love your world building and story telling. I just wish we got more than 2 pages every upload

Nate trashed the story to a 1. He is a contamination that should be erased. The only thing i feel whenever he is involved is intense hatred. A pile of walking talking shit.