Loving Wives Story Comments

2nd read, still a great story. Still a 5* effort

Hmm so, wife is already emotionally cheating with this guy notwithstanding hint that hubby is into wife sharing determines where the theme of this story will head/end.

Not my cup of tea but I may jump in at the ending of Part 5 to see if my speculation was correct.

Spellcheck is your friend Frazabq. Thanks for reading.

Ah, the ol' switchback. The relationship may have been plutonic, but I doubt it since that means formed by solidification of magma deep within the earth. They were dense, just not THAT dense.

Excellent story. The butch got eight years and when released she will lock 18vyears older. Mark will die in prison. BTW, it's YOU'RE (You Are), not Your which is a pronoun only.

Loved the way the wife wanted more and more, just as I would want my wife to become, loving the showing off to others and teasing other men, more please

Better ending... Don realized the kid looked nothing like him, did a DNA test and immediately sent his cheating slut wife packing. She tried to run back to Roger but he was only interested in screwing around with married women so she joined the ranks of stupid bimbo single moms.

So many slut-ray stories. You write drivel quite well.

@xhristianj you apparently do not understand about trained operators. They are not omniscient, are not Jason Bourne, and are not superman. They are trained to a greater extent than others. As a result, their odds of survival are improved, not guaranteed. The world is inundated with...

Well written story.

Disliked it because of the following.

That was textbook sexual harassment. The threat against Ant should have been refuted by the gay couple and the crowd that watched.

Xander should have been fired first thing Monday morning, not brooke.

She'd have a slam dunk wrongful termination...

Loving the story, it's the sort of thing I want my wife to do,so exciting watching your wife walk around knowing men want to fuck herbals to walk her back through the hotel with others knowing another man has fucked her, I find that so horny,keep going with the story

Thanks for your writing.

I really didn't want to like Barbie, but I think I fell in love. What a lovely story!

I read originality in what and how his cuts were created but overall I cannot see the value of all the effort IF she never spotted and reacted to the cut(s). If he was this distraught then LEAVE her behind. But to expend this much effort on a DEAD relationship - who is the cuck? ...

This was unique in a number of ways. Some of them kind of weird.

I appreciate the effort. A 5. For the uniqueness.

The premise is interesting but deeply morally flawed. Your main character is an amoral sociopath. There was no possible reason for the deaths of three people other than his vindictive desire to use homicide as a tool of divorce. He is utterly irredeemable as an individual worthy of...

I guess this was a good story, well written, but I was always expecting a LW gotcha moment that never happened. So this was a tutorial documentary than an interest story with a twist. I'm sure many women in the same scenario wished they had a rich GR.

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4.4**** Hooyah

A truly engrossing, enjoyable and believable read. Thanks for sharing. A definite five stars.

An ok story however it would have been much better without the male bisexual angle

I liked this story. Light, but serious in the issues it raised. I suspect the dissertation on marriage given by L.W. Is not far off the mark. Obviously pregnant women and women with young children needed to be protected, and a marriage to a man would do that. That is a better purpose...

People give Jason grief for taking 'three years' to divorce her.

But he didn't know for the first year and, in truth, he 'seperated' from her almost immediately.

He just spent the last two years proving *he* was the parent best suited for having custody. He also spent quite a bit...

I'm glad I have a mind that can jump so quickly between secnarios. The story kept my ADHD brain engaged across the multiple hours it took to consume, and while a few slightly less jarring switches would have been nice, the story was engaging and fun Well done.

Great little set of stories

I must admit, I was surprised the guys knowingly fooling around with married women had no repercussions.

your talent gives us good stories that are just plain fun to read

not the normal swing story i enjoy,,,,this tale is a mess,,so sad,,and no grieving for toby, rose goes right to camerons bed,,but i read it and its ok,

But, sooner or later something will screw it up. Good story.

The master of violent movies was Sam Peckinpah. He never went a road were killing people is somehow cool and a piece of cake. I'd choose Bring Me the Head of Alfredo Garcia, The Wild Bunch, The Getaway or Straw Dogs over anything from Quarantino.

There is something wrong with this page, it wont let me log in, its only on page 8, so I've had to do it as an Anon, but I'm oldtwit.

I loved how you put this together for us, I thought you left it at the wright place, as I said great read.

Enjoyed the story and your writing a lot. This category is strange - full of people like 26thNC who hate the stories but read them anyway. I only wrote one story for Loving Wives and it was beat up by them. Ignore them - write for yourself and we can benefit from it. Keep up the good...

A most excellent btb! :) *****

I await the conclusion...The depth of the comments on both sides of the equation would tend to represent the power that this story has displayed.

"It's the commitment Miss," I told her, looking down at her as she slumped to the floor. "Not ready to commit myself to a slut.”

It was all about the commitment. Love this line and love this very short and to the point story.

SORRY ABOUT THE TYPING ERRORS. GOT A KEYBOARD ACTING UP ALONG WITH MY STUPIDY.