Fan Fiction & Celebrity Story Comments

She dead ass has alien birth control. This chump doesn't realize he's messing with a professional.

@Anonymous - Far from it. Treat this first part as a prologue! Longer chapters coming!

Hi all! There will be more to come. Life is quite busy of late.

As for your Jesse Chamber’s story. I know it’s been far too long, terribly sorry. I will get round to it. Please bare with me :)

Booo! Nothing happens. Is this going to be one of those 10 single page chapter links?

I am seriously looking forward to Part III and Blake's further acceptance of her submission and her Master's training of his new slave.

Lovely premise.

But all sex is much too rushed. Much too automatic. Much too mechanical.

No exploration of his cock and his balls? No learning what it/he liked?

No dialog about blowjob during it?

No description of her pussy? Shaved? Manicured? Hairy?

Nothing with her breasts?...

I do have a series which has Kartik in a role. The series is called Power Player. It's available on smashwords.

Gotta have more!

It's still sitting in Pending. From what I'm reading it hasn't been long enough for support to get involved.

Do chapter 2 please.

Really hope this gets continued

Okay, I stopped halfway down the first page to come write this comment: you're a great writer and I really enjoy your prose but the exaggerated italics are *killing* me. What I initially thought was a satirical style choice based on the source material came way too fast and way to...

Thanks for the chapter

We need this thing up!!! Keyes Keyes Keyes !!!!!!!

Hey! It's me, Flashtastic. Will you do my Violett Beane's Jesse Chambers's symbiote story anytime soon? It's been almost a year.

I am very impressed with what you've done here. Many comic fans bounce these characters off each other in their heads, who'd be with who, how would the various pieces fit together. This is incredible, in the way it works, in the way you deftly blend the bits of continuity through....

great start to a good idea

Next chapter please! What happens next with Mary Jane and the symbiote?

I love this story. Well written. I hope there will be more to come.

I love this story. Well written Doctor who fic. I hope there will be more to come.

U think he should conquer bumblebee and terra next

Would love to see her with Sarah next

I believe both parties experienced a most rewarding fulfilment with more to come!!

Good work look forward to future chapters

To the author

I loved reading your who wants to be a bimbo stories and being a shy average looking women who just turned 30. And I do not know if you are planning of write any more of these stories. I fantasize what my life would be as one. Now I never finished high school so most...

Sorry to hear about tech problems have you thought of crossposting to other sites?

Amazing story, hope there is a mother and daughter sequel lined up

Amazing.

Follow up with Joyce getting DP'd or turning the tables on Nancy and DPing her for a change? Winona Ryder's tits are too good to pass up. As a MILF, she's way more likely to be a messy gusher/squirter too.

Nice work! Loved the gom jabbar scene - I was wondering how you would handle that. Thank you for writing this.

Welcome back ,Imorol

Impressive Dana Scully got played by the fake psychics Ekon Williams and Blacked owned by the sly prisoner, when the real psychic Belvins was the real deal with Mulder himself in the midst of the hostage situation.

Your longest chapter yet, and hopefully more...

Thank you for the lovely comment!

Good chapter. Don't worry, the big studios never sue any Literotica writers for using their "intellectual property." Not worth the lawyer money or public embarrassment to them

What I'd give to have a pair of Scully's panties. Great tale, hope for more.

That SUX!!!! They need to send it Amazon express post!!!!