Mind Control Story Comments

Simply perfect.

I feel like I'm missing something -- who is Professor Psyche? How is this a flashback tale?

I'm really enjoying this story, the evil bitch melissa controlling them, but Shauna and Heather still manage to find true love with each other. I hope Trey gets his comeuppance soon

It’s very rare to come across such a concise, warm story here, particularly in mind control. From bitter cruelty to education, awareness and grace, done with care and compassion. Well done.

Thanks for the kind words, Mike. Levi and Alina hold a special place in my heart as the favourite couple I have written to date. It was a sad moment, sending them off to a new future together but felt like the right place to end it. 😊

Great story as usual Grace, nicely paced and well written. So glad you are back writing again.

“ In a flash he realized the difference - Isabel somehow wasn't pregnant anymore! But how could that be possible?”

Did you mean Becca?

Please continue!!!!!

Hell yes. Looking forward to seeing all the goddesses have their chosen ones enslaved and the world fall into darkness.

This series has potential; just watch that the unreality of any mind control theme doesn’t overspill into something completely over the top. Delicate balance.

It really needs another chapter. Sorry to say with out it only a 4star general for this. A long term question how the hell does anyone man think they satisfy two highly erotic women forever?

It is very sad to read you may not be writing anymore. I tripped across your stories recently and have been devouring your work! I have really enjoyed all your work and especially this series. I hope you return to writing here at some point.

Shauna and Heather are truly screwed. I’m a firm believer in radical human depravity. By nature, we are essentially evil. As a student of human history, the supporting evidence is overwhelming. Power is the ultimate and most deadly human narcotic. Melissa is thoroughly addicted to...

The anal preference you have is obvious but you really need to find another word than bowels all the time. Like an earlier Anon said, get a thesaurus. At least proofread your work. Some of the errors are just comical.

Another great chapter. This is the first I did not immediately read. It arrived on the day I go to Branson. So here I am finishing at 10:30PM. I drive to Branson which is 55 miles from my house if I take a mountain road. Get a taste of civilization before returning home. And...

Very nice series, one of my favorite. I hope there will be a part 5 soon

Very nice series. One of my favorite. I hope there will be a part 5 soon

Thank you for kind comments.

I liked the first chapter, but I don’t like this one. If a man is a cuckold and likes it, fine. Enjoy your kink. But being forced into it by someone blackmailing your future through drugs/hypnosis doesn’t sit right with me.

Really enjoying your stories, keep up the good work. And, as always STAY SAFE.

Great story.

This is the bleeding edge of experimental fiction, a trans woman feminizing a cis butch? Sure I love butches, but you have to appreciate this as a work of art pushing the boundaries

What amazes me is that with as many stories and authors that has put their imprint on this universe, there hasn’t been one clunker. Every author has brought their own take, yet every story has been a fun read. I have envisioned this universe being turned into a television series....

I am enjoying all of the “Quaranteam” spinoffs, but your’s especially. I wish the rating allowed an occasional sixth star for REALLY great stories.

What's the point if everyone's just a sex puppet. Even the mother and sister are barely more than random bodies if his mind control is this total and nobody minds what happens.

Probably your best chapter ever.

Thank you for another great chapter. Please do not fret about life getting in the way of this amazing tale. IF it takes a bit longer to get a chapter out we all realize you have to do what is best for you for the best quality product go be developed. 5 Stars for this much appreciated...

Sad to see you potentially go because your stories are amazing

Good luck with whatever you do!

Beautiful story can't wait for update

please keep updating this is an excelent story

What a ride. Such a shame you're stepping back, but thanks for this work. It was so well executed.

Awesome chapter. Love what you are building with Marshall/ Valiant. More red heads please. Looking forward to your other work.

Thanks again

Same ol’, same ol’. Another 5⭐️ effort with the emphasis this episode on the apocalyptic nature of the times and without a single carnal scene. Also sheds further light on the bonding process. Clearly not merely between partners since it’s already known among partners as well....

Is there a chinese glyph that, with one slash means 'woman', with two slashes means 'women', and with three slashes means 'trouble'? Can we agree that a glyph with twelve slashes would mean 'torture'? Please continue!!!!!

Thank you again for the work you put into the character list at the front of each chapter! It is so helpful for those of us reading along "live" as the chapters come out. I wish more authors of longer series on Lit would follow your example!

Also, thank you for the update about how...