Humor & Satire Comments

Funny story…my better half says I’m the better dishwasher stacker…

Damn weird story. I would love to hear this story expounded on

Hot story! Sorry I didn't find you toll May 1! Can't vote for you for the April Fools but can give you 5 stars. Loved Matt's April Fools prank on the "Ladies"! At least he got to cum in the bar.

Cheers

SAGE

You know what they say about payback.

i want to take the class!!

We have 32 teeth. If he needs to have dental work on each of them, he will spending a long time filling her hole while she fills his. Maybe I should show my female dentist this story. :)

At one time I envisioned issuing a Round Robin Challenge, a call to publish 1 story in every category... you sir have completed it in a single story! Kudos!!!

Do I want to enroll in this class, or be one of the models? That's a tough decision.

Superb!

I like short stories. This was like driving at eighty. What did you see???

LOVE slap-hapy-papy #9

Super hot! Thank you. I can't wait to see what they get up to in week 2!

I'm a sixty's kid it would have been eat your food or starve or it will be waiting for you to eat in the morning lol

Quit reading when sob wouldn't quit watching the game and concentrate on girlfriend.

With boyfriend like that I began hoping the woman found another guy!!!

What an asshole

I like this if only as it serves to show how gullible people are to believe what they read or are told.

I remember years ago when the evening paper showed dinosaur footprints in the mud where a small stream entered a larger river.

People scrambled to see the footprints, until it was...

Maybe a few years after you wrote this but I truly enjoyed this story. Witty, sexy and adventurous. Thoroughly enjoyed it. Keep doing you as those of us with different talents definitely enjoy your storytelling skills.

Thinking of having the two of them give a Ted Talk which in their minds is just another way to manipulate those who they always look down upon while scamming them out of their hard earned money. Their personal assistant - who is always belittled and mocked by them - decides to reveal...

We need a sequel to this!!!!

Absolutely blissfully tantalising.

The imagery - physical and emotional - is portrayed SO well.

Super writing!

XXX

This ex cat owner enjoyed it! Great fun.

Makes no sense at all .... unless you're trying to show how ridiculous it is to try to write a complete story using only 750-words (and even then, it's kind of weird).

I love this..... ad wanna know what happens later on.

Very GOOD STORY. IDEALISED BUT INSPIRING !!

Ideal Romance but one doesn’t find such beautiful women anymore !! Shame I haven’t met such an ENGLISH ROSE YET !! Throw Everything works in my body & little blue tablets weren’t invented 100 years ago !!

Funny…this author published five very short stories in a period of just two weeks. Does anyone know if he or she is still writing under a different member name? I gave three of the stories a 5, but this one and “Brain Surgeon” 3’s. Too many holes in those two tales. But I wish...

I enjoyed this more than I thought I would. I’ve not yet read any Terry Pratchett, but if this story is any indication of his style, than I shall remedy that ommittance.

I liked it! It held my interest right to the end.

Wow. Another unfinished story full of sorrow with no upside. Why is this in humor and satire? It has neither. 1*

Good One !!!!

LOL

Wonderful ending. I loved it.

@ccitydude - thank you 😊 Emily

I gotta admit, it was the title that caught my eye. I'm really a sucker for that sort of thing. (Pun intended). I was in a couple of garage bands when I was a youth. We'd have killed for a number like that. Well done.

I'm glad Chad got a beat down, but it was left pretty open, and it seems unfair in any universe that James would see jail time for giving Chad what he so richly deserved. Also, no real resolution with James' wife.

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I was hoping to hear that the nurse was in some way connected to...

Fun again. 5 stars.

Bill S.

I'm sorry. If I am out and the lady goes home with someone else, married or not, I'd be done. Dating, change my number and block any social media. If we worked together, I'd quit, to hell with a two week notice. Especially if she was in any type of a position over me.

Married,...

Different in plot and in style. Definitely worth four stars.

JPB NOT BOB